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Ari should ask Gael "Jakred said my planet is going to blow up. Is this true?" Because that way Gael will know that Jakred is sketchy as all get out. Keep up the good work and update soon!! :D

Oh, now that's just mean.

I'm glad you saw my review on your other story^^ It's no porblem that there will be not as much smutt I like this story very much^^ Jakred is such a crul person I hope that Geal will now save aris world or otherwise their relationship might become difficult.... And now Ari was indirectly told what pretakers do.... I have a really bad feeling concerning the next chapter!!!! Can't wait to see you again!!!

Jakred needs to die...painfully

Ugh...Seriously?? Marc is blocked from entry, but Jakred gets to skip right in whenever he wants??? -_-" I really dislike him. And Gael is so stupid...

Yeah, I remember reading that part about their reincarnation, but it was still a bit confusing to me. I think I got the gist of it now, though. Also, I hope you don't take my ramblings too seriously. I'm the kind of person that yells at the characters in the movies w.ether they do what I want them to do or not.

That being said, on to chapter seven's ramblings!

Darn straight, Ari. Fight for your memories. Whether good or bad, they're one of the only things that truly belong to you. Besides, I'm sure Ari'd feel quite the fool if his remaining family kept carping about a huge, sexy man that came looking for him a while back. Gaps in memories occur naturally with age but, come on, who'd want to willingly forget about Marc?

Pfft! Gael gave him only two minutes? I'd have objected to that. Ari's not an object to be picked up and then set back down (memory-less) just on a whim like that. Though, I wonder how fast he blurted out everything within those two sole minutes.

Exactly! Tell it like it is, Ari. 'Marc is supposed to be your friend too,ya butt!' I hope that he even gave Gael a subconscious Thane-ish stare-down of 'shame on you' too.

Even though Gael totally cheated by viewing Ari's memories like that, I'm glad he got to see his personality for himself rather than other people trying to make stuff up about him. Though, we'll see how long that lasts with Mr.I ain't even gonna trust my old friend anymore thanks to one single mistake aimed for my own benefit some hundred years ago.'

Oh-ho! I see what you did there Gael, you sly dog...you totally put on your best 'this style always made Thane weak in the knees' outfit to start wearing Ari down, didnt ya? Tsk tsk, such a cheater.

Ha ha ha! Ari's reaction to Gael asking him to live with him was perfect. 'Moving in with someone is a big deal where I come from!'

Alright, Gael, alright...I admit that my heart skipped a beat, too, when Ari told his fam 'I'll find you again' all Thane-ish like.

Man, I hope nothing happens to them in those few hours...it'd be just their rotten luck if the planet decided to break apart during that time...jeez.

That's so sweet, but if Thane really starts coming back, he's gonna be a target again. Who was after him anyways?

I really like Ari and Geal together^^ They are already so sweet^^ Can't wait for the relationship to progress^^ And of cause I can't wait for the smutt to come^^ Thank you again for the fast update and see you again soon!!!

Aaaaw. Warm & fuzzies!!! Next chap needs warm&fuzzy smexinesss!!!;-) plz update soon, I can't wait 2 read how the relationship will develops from here on out... On another note, I can't find the review replies from ur post. I dunno if I'm just that bad w technology(I'm pathetic 4 a 20yo!!!) Or if its an issue w my device(iPad). Help??? Then again I can't even figure out how 2 become a member on this site(I've TRIED, loox like my stories r stayin on paper).
Plz b back soon:-)
Rukia

Aw nooooo! Poor Gael!! :'(

I hope he comes around and at least tapas with Ari.