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I'm gone for a little bit and boom! Suddenly there are three new chapters for me to read. What a pleasant surprise. Except ahh I'm worried about Gael with the council and what their reactions will be if they know about Ari. Also, Jakred needs to go somewhere. That is all.

That was a greet chapter, can't wait to read more.

Oh coolness Ari's planets saved n 2 minutes!!! Lol. So... Council won't bat an eye when Gael destroys planets faster than slaughter houses kill turkeys the week b4 thanksgiving, but the minute he gives ONE a green light they take offence??? Wow, new Akadian low there, & I thot appointing any 1 guy 2 make any apocalyptical decisions was as screwed up as they could get. Guess not. Poor Ari, he needs a happy ending(in the sexual way) worse than a vamp needs blood!!! I hope the bad guy gets whats coming 2 him soon enuf 2. At least I hope Gael calls him out on his assholeness 2 Ari
Plz update soon
Rukia

I have a feeling geal will be punished....But I'm glad he emideatly reacted to aris fear^^ I'm eagerly waiting for more see you again next week!!!

Oooooh snap...wondering who Jakred's gonna end up in the sack with now. Probably Gael, if he manipulates things enough. Though it'd be interesting if he somehow ended up sleeping with Ari instead! Actually, that sounds kind of hot, my two favorites together. No offense to Gael, of course. I mean, I ultimately want Gael and Ari to get together, but still! Either way, I think Jakred's going to end up with heartbreak.

Ari's crocodile tears and 'I'd rather return to my world to die in ignorance' stance really got me in the heartstrings. Precious thing. I just want to squish him in a hug.

Nicely done, Gael. No pussyfooting, just outright putting out the volcano. And, what do you know? Is that the first signs of flirting, I see? Hee hee. Dagnabbit, he would be dragged into court just when they were starting to finally talk. Figures. I sure hope you're working on the end chapters even as we read. I'm too invested in this story to not see it through to the end.

Errant thought- I'm actually logged in for once.

oh boy..Gael finally wins some points with me too, but I'm still iffy about him.

Omg so great, I love this story, but i don't likeJakred he's always trying to start something. Updated soon please.

Usually when I read a story, there's a character I end up liking more than the main character. And more than once, cetain types of main characters have grown on me. But, I'm happy to admit that Ari has been my favorite this entire time. In this chapter, I just loved how worried and insecure he got when Hanson mentioned the other clones and Akadians wanting to have at Gael's ass. Having been the main attraction at a brothel, he could have easily been snooty and egotistical. Instead, what immediately came to his mind was 'I am so not the biggest fish in the pond aymore.' And I love how concerned he is about it...I know that all he feels for Gael right now is an immense curiosity and some lust, but it's definitely a start!

Ha! Ari called Jakred a clone. Friggin priceless. Whoa, and he dropped quite the bomb on him. Can't wait to see how Gael will get out of this one.

Oh, and once again, it's just suuuch a waste that a fine thing like Jakred can't set his eyes on someone that's single and not haunted with the ghost of his mate's previous incarnation. He so needs to get legitimately laid.

Gael's got some splaing to do.... and why do I get the feeling that Jak-off is a dick now but will redeem himself at some point in the story???? Sorry I don't review very often but I do rate all the time... Gael's turning out to be some piece of work huh? I'm wondering how Ari will turn Akadia on it's head maybe he'll make it fall on it's proverbial ass.... Thank YOU for updating and Sharing this awesome story!