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I've still gotta wonder, why Thane specifically? I'm guessing they want Gael for some reason, and it WOULD be an excellent way to get to him. Just seems like it isn't working.

WOW that was just fubar! OH and if you didn't know what that means "Fucked Up Beyond All Recognition"... You know a big part of me wanted to really hate or at least really dislike Jakred but after that whole thing I'm feeling really bad for the poor guy... I hope at some point Kron get's his come-up-in's! NO one not even Jakred deserved what happened to him! I hope Ari at some point helps Jakred I know that sounds wrong but I think Ari can relate and maybe when all is said and done they can be friends... I'm glad Gael is all good now well at least more or less... Thank YOU for updating I look forward to what happens at dinner..

Ok, so I had one night of sleep to digest the chapter. I think this last chapter was one of the best so far. Are you going to cover how/why Jakred got involved with Kron in the first place? Also, is anyone going to be able to detect that wall Kron built in Jakred's mind? I feel like someone has to be expert enough at going through minds to notice it (For some reason, I feel like Thane would have been able to?) I was confused as to why Gael didn't see anything related to Kron when he was searching Jakred's mind, but now I know why. Also, I really can't tell if any of the council members genuinely care about Gael or they're all out to get him and enjoy being manipulative...Also, just wondering, but do you have in mind the total number of chapters this story is going to be? I know this review is a jumble

Jakred got what was coming, I thought they were going to killed him. Can't wait for the next update. Wonderful story.

I really start to pity Jakred!!!! He doesn't seem so evil now!!!! Hope they will be able to help him get away some time!!! See you agin next week or in my review od Singularity wichever comes first^^

Jakred~!! Poor baby. All things considered, the two of the Tier 1 men really did go pretty easy on him. And they were in awe of him. If only Jakred really did give one of them a chance. Getting forcibly laid is not the same as a willing romp. *sigh* What are we going to do with you, Jakred? Kron needs a swift kick in the nuts, that's what he needs.

As for Ari and Gael...the flower~! And the kiss! Too sweet. It kills me.

Damn...dont fuck with Kron! I really really really cant wait for all the new shit to come to light! More soooooon please♥

(YES! AN UPDATE!) Why'd you make me feel bad for Jakred? Now a part of me is actually hoping that Thane/Ari will save him somehow. Also, I guess this is delayed, but how come Hanson didn't hear when Ari called him the first time? Was someone messing with Hanson?

WOW ain't that some shit! I was wondering when Ari was going to tell Gael that J had spilled the bean about his world... I wonder why the council wants to chat with Gael... it's not like he really did anything wrong... I mean unless they are taking in to account Ari... OH and will we find out why Hanson hadn't heard Ari? Did J have something to do with that? Will we find out what happens to those clones that get decommisioned? Thank YOU for updating and sharing!

I've really been enjoying this story. I'm eager to see what will happen next. If you have a mailing list, please add me. xoxo Robin