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for Sacrifices

by Sweetsong22

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoooooah!!! And THANK YOU forvte response!!! But now I feel bad cause I no ur other readers r probly seein it & thinkin 'poor author gotta go out the way 2 post here 4 this ONE dum reader who can't find the response page'. BUT! Thanks for the answers they cut my confusion down by half. Now we just gotta find out what happens next. I hope the Akadian can b saved!!! As an immortal race try can't b an ever expanding populace(despite my horid short hand I've got a great vocabulary). Which means that MILLIONS of them dying would likely cause the entire societal structure to crack- if not fall apart. If they did die, the only hope of their society surviving intact is a sudden boom to replace the empty roles left by the deceased- or maybe a REAWAKENING??!?(looots of Akadians that only perpetually nap here). Heehee I love when my theories show results n stories. U no, the only way now 4 this 2 hav a completely happy ending is if thane & Ari both live/get an independent body- and Gael bonds w them BOTH... Maybe Aris consciousness can b moved 2 the old thane clone!!! Is it sad I hav mental fanfics of fabrics??? Lol. Plz update SOON!!!!!
Rukia
PS: thank again 4 the reply, I'll try again 2 find the actual page!!! Wish me luck!!!
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I FOUND IT!!!!! I FOUND THE REVIEW REPLY PAGE!!!!!!! 8'D!!! How sad is it I had 2 go 2 an entirely different story- then ask a friend 2 show me how 2 find one... Seriously I've bin on this site for YEARS & only introduced her 2 it a few day ago... And she figures this crap I still dunno out. I truly am tech retarded :'( AND IM ONLY 20yo!!! I got on a different story so she wouldn't c I was on a slash story(she's still iffy on it DESPITE it being 70% or so of the stories. Lol. Sorry 4 the inconvenience of making u put ur responses 4 me on ur stories wen u didn't want 2!!! I'll b good & find them on the other page from now on!!! :-)
Rukia
person anon~ish
schedule July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW HOW FUCKED UP IS THAT???? I was thinking that they might share a body sort of but to loose Ari completely yeah that's just wrong on so many levels! Now I'm wondering if Penalt had Thane's essence this whole time and if he did why keep it secret? Is he a good guy or bad guy? Also now that Thane is who he is will his body be different from Ari's, will he live longer? How is Gael going to deal with this new kink in his world? Did Penalt know of Kron's plans or is he in ca-hoot's with him? Thank YOU for updating!
person Mona Thompson
schedule July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking gods! Thane? But Gael loves Ari! And its gotta be a lie! WTF is happening...update soon please!
person smint45
schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh I have a really bad feeling concerning this thane!!!! I really hope feal will realise something is wrong and will rescue ari somehow!!!! See you again next week!!!
person Angel
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What the crap?!?! Gael and Ari were awesome together! Besides Ari was just starting to get used to Gael wanting him for him and now it's all down the drain... Please update soon!
person Zas
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg what happen I am confused, I hope you have more details for us next time.
person Nyth wolf
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg I need to know what happens next like asps
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hoooooooooooooooooooly shit. How in the world...?

I know that Thane's full consciousness was needed for whatever prophecy they've been going on about, but seriously?

And, goodness. Poor Thane doesn't even know what he's SAYING. I'm sure he totally did NOT want that to sound as ominous as it did to Gael. I just hope Gael breaks everything down to him.

This is so wild.

I'm gonna be freaking out all the way until the next chapter.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't honestly think this is the original Thane. He wouldn't have just bin casual about Ari's death from the get go, even without meeting, Thane is 2 compassionate 4 that. Perhaps what brought him back alterd him n the same sence that I believe Gaels own father was changed.I'm starting 2 theorize that the root of the problems isn't Akadian(or at least not technically) as I've stated I feel something happened 2 forcefully change Krons personality. It's so frustrating not being able 2 find the review replies 2 know what ur feedback is!!!!! Normally I c authors will post the replies b4 or after the updated chaps, like the occasion u did 4 me(thanx again 4 that!!!). But I think the root problem may b n the technology &or whatevernonbeings make decisions on Aakadia- like what decides the 'perfect job' of Akadian kids or apparently can make a centuries dead consciousness come 2 life... Waaa!!! 2 many revolving thots & ideas on the issue!!! Plz update soon!
Rukia