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For Thane to have been reincarnated on another planet like that...I'm sure Akadians would shit bricks if they realized how many planets were destroyed on the decisions of others, planets that could have very likely held their reincarnated mates. Gael himself is gonna shit royal bricks when he realizes Ari's the real deal, too.

On a tangent, I like how hard Ari tried to lay on the charm with Demarcus. Ha! Gael would have seen red if he knew.

Jakred seems to have some deep envy issues. If only he put that kind of devotion to better use. Does he even have a mate?

I'm also seriously doubting that a conniving pennypincher like Coen would even seriously keep Ari's family well fed week after week. Telling him he could go see them also feels like barely more than a ruse.

I also don't see Demarcus being able to save anyone on the planet, let alone the planet itself. Even if he somehow did manage to convince Gael to save the planet, Jakred would surely try to interfere using whatever means necessary. And they also have that whole 'no interfering' rule.

So much chaos in so little a time. Makes me want to gnaw at the edge of my desk after every chapter.

Woah another update! I like the Monday and Wednesday idea. Hmm hopefully Demarcus will be able to convince Gael when the time comes without too much grief. It won't be easy though, a clone, No matter how much he meant well, was a pretty crappy thing to do. Really enjoyed getting to hear more about Aris past.

Now i cant wait for the continuation of this story..

Ah, I hope this turns out well.

I really really love this story!!!I'm normally not so into the alien thing but you discribe it in a fascinating way^^ Soooo can't wait for next week!!!!1 Thanks for the post and see you soon!!!!

Really interesting begining! Can't wait for more!

I love your writing and the worlds your stories take place in. Looking forward to reading this one! :D

Oo. I love how this is going!!!! Plz keep it up & update soon!!! Question: could this possibly end tragically??? If so could u plz giv me a heads up ahead of time??? I can't take tragedies, they depress me 4 DAYS. And in the next chapter or 2, could u explain the hole point n the akadians opinion of seeding & destroying planets??? I can't really imagine the purpose of it if they aren't colonizing or taking the planets' recourses...
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Rukia

I really like this story! There were a couple issues with the wrong word being used by accident or a grammar thing but that's just me being nit picky (and I probably completely misspelled that). I love the world that you built and the characters in it! I can already tell that I'm gonna dissolve into a crying mess at some point in this story. Any ways I felt you did a good job of explaining the different worlds/cultures without over explaining or being too vague. Can't wait for the next update!

Yay new Story! I really enjoyed the first chapter. You are so good at World building. I can't wait till Ari and Gael meet.