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for Sacrifices

by Sweetsong22

person smint45
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god the suspension is killing me^^ I hope Demarcus will be able to help him!!!! I don't think his family will like too see what he does to support him.... See you again soon!!!!
person Moku_Sui
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh god...this cliff hanger...>.<
person Thirdly
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm wishing Coen a slow and painful death. I hope Marc manages to help them somehow. And thank goodness Gael finally figured out that Thane was really murdered! The scene where Pelos lended him a hand for once was a relief, but now I'm just freaking out about Ari, and his family's, safety.

Man, I had a feeling that Jakred had a thing for Gael's behind. So, Akadians actually choose their mates? If that's the case, then Jakred needs himself his own mate...preferably one that would spank him silly whenever he misbehaved. Yes, daily spankings are definitely starting to sound ideal for him.
person smint45
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great Story^^ Can't wait for the next meeting with Demarcus!!!! I wonder how Gael will react when he sees Ari... and how Ari will react when he gets to know Demarcus is an alien^^ Soo Can't wait I'm really glad for the fast updates^^ See you again soon!!!!
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, poor Ari. Hope his circumstances change 4 the better soon!!! And will u soon explain the wired phenomenon that killed thane at the start??? A whale suddenly appearing when ther was no previous life forms don't make much sense.
Plz update soon!!!
Rukia
person Moku_Sui
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
;_; When is Ari going to meet Gael?
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your stories, as always, are so intense and heart stopping. Can't wait to see what Coen has planned. Hopefully Demarcus can save them. Great job.
person deedee
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh sh*t! I guess I should be happy that Ari was caught so he can eventually meet Gael, but still :/.... Thank god Pelos was there to help. I'm usually okay with non con and dub con but I don't think I could've stomach that one.
person Thirdly
schedule June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm anxious for them to meet.
person Tahn
schedule June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I doubt that he's gonna like that when he sees Ari that night. I forsee him being rather angry with the brothel owner in fact.