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Aw poor guy!!! So wait, u said his father used the power wen he gave birth. So why didnt he tell the other father why he was still pregnant??? Hmmm... I love this so far, already hoping things get better I'm so attached 2 the daddy & baby!!! Plz update soon!!!
Rukia

Your intro has peaked my interest. Please continue.

Hey, just found your story. I'm intrigued by the Wording talent. Is the 2nd chapter complete? I could only see the first paragraph.

I just read the new chapter 1 since I saw it seemed longer then the one I read yesterday, though I really like the first one this one is much better since it tells us more about the characters and their world. Is chapter 2 complete? I don't know if it's just me but all I get is a paragraph?

I like the story. Curious to find out what happens next. The story line seems interesting too.

Really nice beginning, wished it was a bit longer though. Looking forward to next chapter!

the song "your just to good to be true can't take my eyes off you" was the back ground music as I read this... That's some shite right there! He can't call a doctor because everyone's gotta be a bitch! I hope the baby makes it! WHO is the father though and where is the child's mother and why does he have to take care of said child? I know I'll have to wait but enquiring minds want to know! thank you for sharing!