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by JayDee

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schedule June 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's not often that I write up a review, but then again there haven't been too many stories lately that have caught my interest. Normally I do indeed hate anything besides the third person style, but your story was quite funny. It's a nice, short little blurb, but shows your strength in writing. You made me chuckle, you turned what I expected to happen right around on me, and most impressively, made me read something besides third person. I would be interested in seeing more from you.