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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Maybe get a Beta for spelling errors, but who has time for that ;) Can't wait to see what you do with the plot, happy writing!
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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think you just got me hooked.
Carsten seems to be having doubts about the job he was assinghed. Also he doesn't know what he agreed to by the cocky way he's acting. Can't help but feel bad for getting hurt. Also I wonder what this Damon Klein haves against Terrence Braxton? Mmm. I know wait to find out. Anyway, liking this. Thumbs up! Send in the next chapter please.
Carsten seems to be having doubts about the job he was assinghed. Also he doesn't know what he agreed to by the cocky way he's acting. Can't help but feel bad for getting hurt. Also I wonder what this Damon Klein haves against Terrence Braxton? Mmm. I know wait to find out. Anyway, liking this. Thumbs up! Send in the next chapter please.
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June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Heya, Ky!!! Long time no see!!!!! :(
I'm excited to revisit this story! I've been wondering where you disappeared to! lol
I'm excited to revisit this story! I've been wondering where you disappeared to! lol
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June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This looks intresting. Can't decide if I like it or not. So I'll give this a chance. It looks good.