rate_review Reviews

Well, it needs a bit of editing, and more flushing out. Things happened way too quickly with very little detail. It's almost like a summary of a fuller story. I think if you work on it, it could be good. Keep at it, you can do it.

Sososososososooooooo scary! I just read this during the day (I work alot of nights so I was laying in bed reading trying to calm my nerves to nap...that did NOT happen) and got totally spooked! Sooo creepy...just the way I love it! I swear you could totally make this into a longer story...go into the history of the house...or tell the story of the woman all dressed in black with her bloodred nails. It would have endless possibilities with many spooky chapters...but it isnt like you need my suggestions! You got what it takes and are amazing all on your own Thank you so much for this story...I loved it! Keep up the amazing work and and I cant wait to read more more MORE♥

I MUST know which parts are true! There's no way in hell I would have stayed there :) A very intriguing story indeed x