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That's... So sad. Your writing is wonderful

So glad to see an update! It's so creepy and frightening, but addictive. Glad he didn't get his tongue cut out, but it seems like his captor will probably threaten various amputations as punishment, crazy asshole. Hopefully the narrator gets through this in one piece. Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next chapter!

Horrifying. And i must know what is about to come. Keep up with thisr awesome piece.

Loving this story so far. Very creepy. The premise is really engaging in how scary it is, and the chapters so far have been spot on! Though I'd think it might be tough to write a story in which the narrator is blind, because you can't use any visual descriptions. Still, the chapters so far have definitely been illustrative and descriptive despite that, and I applaud you for that! From what I can guess, the kidnapper was perhaps a stalker of the narrator? And the narrator kept turning him down, which made the kidnapper finally snap and do this? Hard to say, but the kidnapper's dialogue sounds like typical stalker rhetoric. I kind of hope that the narrator can somehow eventually get his sight back, but maybe I'm just a sucker for happy endings! Still, I love how creepy this is, so I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing! And I'm loving the speedy updates!

(Also, I noticed you have Anonymous reviews disabled? You might get more reviews if you turn that on, so just a thought!)

Wow.
Please update again soon.

Damn I'm kind of scared to continue reading the updates that are about to come in the future....
But I'm dying to know the rest of the story just the same!!!!
The plot so far is so dark... complicated... comfusing...
It's very well written. This story has a lot of potential that by what I've read in those 2 chapters- you'll be able to continue and write this story in such a way that would leave your readers begging for more.

Very interesting beginning. Who are *either* of these character? And WTF is going on?