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for In The Dark

by Dailynn

person Ganymede
schedule September 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Are you still working on this? I just wanna say I love it and I hope you won't drop it. Thanks for your hard work! :) 

schedule June 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Abandoned?

person Anonymous
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please update! 

person Anonymous
schedule December 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please update?

person Anonymous
schedule November 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Abandoned?

person Anon
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave us hanging like that! LOL Please update
person Mint
schedule February 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome to see an update, and this was as creepy as ever. Man, your "bad guy" is scary. It's interesting how you portray that without any visual cues at all. He really seems psychotic rather than calculating or merely sociopathic. He seems to really want to accept the delusion that he's creating and almost throws tantrums when things don't go how he imagined. I'm really drawn to horror dynamics so this is really interesting, though I also want to see where it goes from here, and learn more background about the protagonist... anyway, thanks for updating! Hope to read more soon!
person Rose
schedule January 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
More?
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great writing to make us see what's going on even when the narrator is blind. I can feel his despair and fear. When's the next update? Please tell me there's more!
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You are great at describing what's going on, even when the narrator is blind and can't see. Looking forward to reading more from you.