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for Libertine Hotel

by LittleBlackKitten

person Shelley
schedule September 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hi there, I read your author's note.  Two year olds can keep you busy 24/7. I remember them well.  But seriously, I think this story is great.  Although I'm not sure what she's getting herself into.  So until you tell us readers different, I'll keep checking for new chapters when you can find the time to write.  Great writing and storytelling.  

Shelley

AFF chapter 17

person Shelley
schedule March 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is getting really exciting.  But I'm concerned that Jade is going to become a killer after all the things that have happened to her.  Also what is going on with Sterling?  I don't like the collar 24/7.  I thought he really cared for her as a person.  Now he wants a submissive round the clock and given what she just did to Joe, the last thing she is a submissive.

person Shelley
schedule October 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi.  I'm starting to get an uncomfortable feeling about Sterling.  I don't know why,  but I love the tale you are weaving and can't wait to see where you will take us readers next and what it will all mean for Jade and her future.  ---  Shelley

person Shelley
schedule September 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi there,  I just wanted to let you know that although I am not into all the blood and gore (so I just skimmed past it) I do love this story and your writing is phenomenal.  I'm looking forward to your future chapters and what becomes of Jade after what just happened.  ---  Shelley

person Shelley
schedule September 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I was so glad to see another chapter from you.  I don't care that we have to wait until you have time to write, just please don't give up on this story.  I want to see if Jade gets her justice or revenge either works for me.  And if she and Sterling have a future together.

person Ky
schedule August 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Tough crowd! I can't wait for more Sterling and Jade. I hope this place gets what is coming to it. I hope your baby (and writing progress!) is doing well!  

person Jess
schedule September 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this chaper and I liked it. I can't wait to read more!
person Ky
schedule September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see Seymour get what is coming to him.
person Ky
schedule September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Haha. No, just Ky as in "my name." Very fitting though! haha. I like how the story is continuing to progress. I look forward to finding out what Sterling realized! ;P
person Ky
schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I normally do not review stories that I read on this website, but I had to tell you that I look forward to reading every chapter you post. I hope that Seymour gets what is coming to him, and I look forward to seeing what happens with Sterling and Jade!