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for Falling for Her

by CL.Mustafic

person Tahn
schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awwz, love the sweet fluff between them.
person Tahn
schedule June 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was hoping they would move closer. I wonder if Becca's got some trust issues after what she's been through, and doesn't wanna tell them? But, come on, it's ok to be weak in front of people you care about, and who care about you. She should know that they won't judge her for breaking down. I can't wait to see a little baby Riley running around, and wouldn't it be great if Becca moved in, and had one of her own? Getting a bit ahead of myself here, but it's the perfect solution for Doc wanting kids. How far ahead were you planning this three way romance btw? Like, when did you know she was gonna become an important part of their lives?
person Peabody
schedule June 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I wasn't going to read this but decided to take a chance on it. So far I like it but that's probably because its still just Gavin and Lex together with out Becca. I'm not sure if I'll be able to keep reading once that happens
person Sakura
schedule June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have made the choice to let Gavin and Lex live on in my mind as they were at the end of FFH. Please know that I still love your work and will continue to support your writing and looking forward to more of 'Picking Up the Pieces' and any future works you have.
schedule June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I had a feeling the woman in the prologe was Becca.

She really got herself into one fine mess! I'm glad she made it safely to Gavin and Lex's place. :)

Sheila and Riley are so funny; they are just like an old married couple! lol I can't wait for their little bambino to be born. :)

And Gavin is great, getting the approval for a clinic so he could ask Riley to join him. That was his ulterior motive, right? Get his friends up there with him? lol

Can't wait for the next update. Maybe we'll find out how in the world Becca got into the big bad world of bondage and such.
person Tahn
schedule May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, is it the chick from Lex and Gavin's first threesome? Eek!
person Jetfire
schedule May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So, I wont be reading this because I want to keep Gavin and Lex how they were at the end of FFH. But I still wanted to let you know that you still have my support and I can't wait for all your other stuff, this just isn't up my street.

Hope you still feel the love :D

Hugs Aduial
person Tahn
schedule May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! Poor Becca. It was so sweet to see Lex and the Doc again ^_^ They'll make it right.
person Psy-girl
schedule May 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, this sequel seems to get off in an interesting start. Wonder who's the mysterious girl and what lies await for Gav and Lex next. Hope to see more of this story from you.
person Angel
schedule May 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope the girl is Becca... Just saying lol. Update soon please!! :D