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for Falling for Her

by CL.Mustafic

person Kellie
schedule November 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I keep checking the site sporadically hoping for an update and thought I'd leave you a review so that you know people are still reading and enjoying your stories. Also, congrats on getting some of your works published! That's awesome! I've read most of your stories and I'm sorry that I've never commented before. I'm a bit of a lurker and tend to read without commenting, however, I really enjoy your stories and this one in particular has been a favorite. Hope everything is going well and look forward to the rest of this story whether it's on here or published. 

person Tahn
schedule February 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I hope she doesn't hurt their feelings for running off like that.
person A
schedule February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love your story!
person Tahn
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awz, "We'd like to date you." How cute is that?
schedule January 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events with Katy offering to let Becca rent her apartment. Kinda puts a wrench in the boys' plans. How would they explain that to Jean anyway? lol

I wonder what Becca will say to this. :)

Am I all caught up now, CL? Was there another new story you started that I forgot about? lol
person Tahn
schedule July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wanna hit them all on the head for being dense, but even if the boys figure out that she wants more than sex from them, I don't think she's quite ready for that yet.
person jit
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And we thought the boys were stubborn about getting together.. but in Becca's defense, she does have some emotional baggage to unload before getting involved with this family.. as I get the feeling that is where they are headed. Now, did I just pick up on a familiar restaurant? Where in the timeline? No wonder you have to write to get these people out of your head.. I think there is an entire town or two there.. (I do really like how your stories interact together that way, though.)
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awww, congrats on little baby Alex! :) Glad to see Sheila and Riley still bantering. lol

I have a feeling that Gavin and Lex are going to have the wrong idea about why Becca ran off. Hopefully she'll be able to explain in the next chapter, and then she'll realize they feel the same way. :)

Oh! And congrats to Becca for landing that job! :) One thing though: she filled out a W-4, not a W-2. A W-4 is filled out when you first get a job, and the W-2 is the income sheet that's mailed to you for your taxes. :)
person Shelley
schedule July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved original story of Gavin and Lex and I know I am going to love this one as well.
schedule June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excitement! Sheila and Riley are having their baby! :) Riley's so cute. I can imagine that even being a doctor, and knowing what to do can be nerve-wracking when it's your own family.