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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This voice in this story is very strong. I feel connected to the narrator. Please keep writing!
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I do wish you would update this faster, only because I really wanna know what happens. I understand life does not make it easy to keep up with constant writing, but a girl can dream ^_^
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another amazing chapter. Your characters have so much life, thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers.
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was as good as the first one!
I'll wait for an update. You can be sure of that.
I'll wait for an update. You can be sure of that.
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well done and nicely written! I look forward to reading more when you have time!
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, we're finding out more about this really awesome universe of yours. so the saltarians broke the stalemate, with the death of the killavray king?
why do the salts want to take over ben nir kingdom?
are they warmongers or what?
i cant wait to read more!
why do the salts want to take over ben nir kingdom?
are they warmongers or what?
i cant wait to read more!
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So after reading the second chapter, I am now thoroughly hooked. Will be looking forward to the next one.
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this is an amazing story! I just found it and couldn't stop reading even though I've got a major migraine attack coming up.
I LOVE IT! Your narrating, dialogues and descriptions are so realistic (well, they feel very realistic to me, what do I know about a middle aged fantasy kingdom? Ha!)
Poor William with that bleeding wound having to spent the night in such a way, I don't feel envious.
Please keep writing!! :)
I LOVE IT! Your narrating, dialogues and descriptions are so realistic (well, they feel very realistic to me, what do I know about a middle aged fantasy kingdom? Ha!)
Poor William with that bleeding wound having to spent the night in such a way, I don't feel envious.
Please keep writing!! :)
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just tried to leave a review and it disappeared so am trying again and hope it goes through this time. That darn recaptcha gets me everytime, LOL.
Kudos for writing another epic chapter. I am routing for William to survive whatever is coming his way and not to lose his soul to Alexander. This story is so well written and I haven't read one like it here on AFF that I have become so invested in. Please take your time writing it because I know whenever you do update it will be well worth the wait.
If you set up a mailing list for updates on this story, please add me to it.
~ Katie ~
Kudos for writing another epic chapter. I am routing for William to survive whatever is coming his way and not to lose his soul to Alexander. This story is so well written and I haven't read one like it here on AFF that I have become so invested in. Please take your time writing it because I know whenever you do update it will be well worth the wait.
If you set up a mailing list for updates on this story, please add me to it.
~ Katie ~
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was well worth the wait and I can't wait until next update.
I am wondering why no one has noticed yet that William is bleeding from his fairly fresh shoulder wound but probably haven't because he's still wearing his cloak and it hasn't seeped through. I like Jackson and wonder will he and William form a bond of friendship. Alexander reminds me of a wild lion waiting to pounce on his victim who unfortunately just happens to be William. I am very worried about his upcoming trial.
I hope you can keep up with at least a weekly schedule of updating this.
I am wondering why no one has noticed yet that William is bleeding from his fairly fresh shoulder wound but probably haven't because he's still wearing his cloak and it hasn't seeped through. I like Jackson and wonder will he and William form a bond of friendship. Alexander reminds me of a wild lion waiting to pounce on his victim who unfortunately just happens to be William. I am very worried about his upcoming trial.
I hope you can keep up with at least a weekly schedule of updating this.