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for The Sage Haze

by windseeker2305

person peacock7
schedule May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your stories. I think they're perfect in every way from the storylines, to the characters, word length, writing style, etc. I don't normally review but I just couln't help myself. I'm especially loving the fast updates which can be difficult for some to do. Thanks so much for that and can't wait to find out what happens next XD !
person Lufa
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is absolute perfection! I have been in love with this story the minute you posted it. It pretty much makes me feel every emotion! You can't possibly get tired of this story, especially since Damien is such a fabulously s character, he had me laughing when he started slipped his phone under the door, snatched it back, and ran a off! Tony's reaction was the priceless! I am seriously smiling way to much right now! Thank you for this grand story and of course I look forward to future posts!
person anon-ish
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Both chapters were AWESOME! I love the angst and the make up sex and everybody's drama! Seriously starting to like Newton! I wonder what's going to happen when the group finally goes to kick Carters ass and all involved with Shane's beating and almost rape???? I know I know I'll just have to keep reading to find out!
person anon-ish
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN! I SWEAR TO ALL THAT IS HOLY! I LOVE YOUR STORY'S! I love how realistic you make your characters and FUNNY OH MY GOODNESS! I laughed so hard my stomach hurts like I've been doing sit ups all day! The whole shot-gun thing YEAH THAT had me in tears! It's funny too because my own Dad did something similar when I was 16 and realized his oldest daughter wanted to date~! Yeah he's still like that now and I love him all the more for it~! I just love all the characters of this story even the guy who got laid out by Tony, I'm thinking Damien's dad brought said guy to the firm in hopes of him hooking up with his son. But hey I could be wrong but I'll read on any ways cause I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR STORY'S!
person anon-ish
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT DID I MENTION THAT I LOVE IT???? Oh Newton I wonder what Daddy asked you to do for him??? Did his dad ask Newton to help control him, watch over him, groom him to be the president of the company???? I would love to know what kind of conversation those two have to make Damien think so lowly of Newton. I loved that Newton turned him on though! I wonder if Kenny is going to let what happened fly with out some sort of retaliation in school or when Shane is alone. Also I wonder what kind of dirt the boys pulled up for Damien on that Carter kid...