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Amazing. You are a great writer!

Oh my god I love this story. The characters are fucking awesome! I'm mentally screaming right now cuz I'm scared that Damien is dead or someone important is gonna get hurt and it's leaving me on the edge of my seat. Love this story love your writing, please keep going!! I can't wait too see what happens!

You should feel so proud of this story, it is amazing. It took me a minute to get into and when I started it I didn't think it was going to turn out the way it has. I had predicted it being something completely different but what you have written is a great piece of work. I do hope you update soon and continue on. Thanks for entertaining us.

So this story is fantastic, it's got a good pace, incredible characters, and an interesting plot that doesn't slow down. The long chapters are great and honestly this is a story I get a huge kick out of reading. Looking forward to more.

Love, love, love. We need another chaper, I hate cliffhangers. Lol

I knew it I knew it I FUCKING KNEW IT~! I was thinking about the Jag when he walked by it..... Tell me he wasn't in the car yet just used his key alarm to open said doors???? I so happy Shane get's to race again.... I thought the picture for the x-mass present was really well thought of! I mean that in the writing sense I don't think others would have thought of some thing like that... YOU always surprise me with all of your chapters and they are always awesome! I'm gonna be on pins and needles until I find out what happened to Damien!!!! NICE CLIFFY THOUGH! Thank YOU as always for updating when you can!~!

It's getting a little weird how Tony always calls Shane 'baby boy' I think it makes it seem like he wishes Shane was even younger... Like teens. Keep up the good work!

THIS ONE JUST OOZED CUTENESS! I loved it! AH I was kinda hoping Tony would give him the ring at the skating rink but that's cool too! WOW once everyone get's back into town that's when SHITE is going to hit the proverbial fan huh???? I hope they don't forget about those guys that fucked Shane up before moving to his new home! OI I totally hope Billy and Ru hook up! Anywho I was happy to see the new chapter I was almost going through withdrawal's! Thank YOU for updating hope all is well in your neighborhood!

I've had a great time reading your story!
It's so well written, with an interesting storyline and very well fleshed out characters.It's seriously up there with the best original fictions I've read (try Falls Chance Ranch, etc.). I would have gladly reviewed every single chapter but I was too busy taking in what I was reading lol. Please keep the chapters coming :)

Dja

TALK ABOUT BEING CREEPED OUT! I was listening to the Danse Macabe when Damien heard it! I just about jumped out of my damn skin I swear! I was hoping it would play again while Jared was about... I loved that we got to meet one of Jared's friends! I can't wait to really meet Billy! Will the others meet him too or just Damien, will Dad know about him too? OH poor Shane! I can understand his feelings! My Mom is not by biological but SHE IS TO ME any who I was three when she became my new Mom to me and my sister we were never told that she wasn't our real Mom I guess they were waiting to tell us when we got older but there is always someone who let's the proverbial "cat" out of the bag. It's funny her and I always butted heads when it came to my father I was his first borne and Daddy's love their lil girls! I finally understood why we didn't get along often my poor Father was always having to choose and it pissed us both off, you know my Mom said even when you were three yrs old you knew I wasn't your real Mom SO YEAH I totally get where he is coming from but like Damien as I got older I saw the error in what we did to each other and my Dad. He married an AWESOME WOMAN! I hope Shrod is going to be just that too!