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I really like this story and it's so very well written and I am craving more.

WOW that was a great chapter! I wonder what's in the box and what happened to his guardian? I understand now why Fen has been a lil distant in his attraction to Blake it's because he was a lil older then Blake. I am really enjoying this story and the funny interactions between Fen and Blake. I'm also enjoying the speed at which the plot is going. I can't wait to read what happens when they finally reach space, will they run into pirates again? Or will they run into something else.... I'm still wondering what Blake is, is he just like Fen or is he a different race altogether? I wonder if Fen has a bounty on his head made by his Mom trying to find him, I wonder if she's going to sent out an escourt to make sure he comes home?

This story is so good! Your an excellent writer. Hope to see more.

I nearly choked on my Ben & Jerry's ice cream when I read the part where Fen went to get drinks and the lil blonde was trying to pick up Fen while Blake watched on.... I'm still snickering over that still... I love Zari she sounds like someone I would like to hang with myself... WHO doesn't like to shop? I feel like I was just as surprised as Blake when it came to the space port and saloon. I'm totally loving this story! I can't wait to meet MOM!

Ahh, intriguing, please continue.

Oh, I like this! Please continue it and I hope you have an update schedule.

Oooooooooo...more please!?!

WOW I'm already loving this story! The plot so far is just out of this world! Pun intended I can't wait till Blake finds out what he's going to be working on and just who "Justin" is aka Fen and where he might have come from... Are we going to learn more about Blake's guardian? Is Fen some kind of prince who's been sent to Earth for doing something stupid? Is Blake going to meet his real family??? Do all of Fen's kind have some sort of ability?

Take him, you know you want to. You should take his guardian too.