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May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope you keep going.
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May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!!
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May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well... I am so glad Ren, Zari and friends were able to find and rescue Blake before anything bad happened to him. I am enjoying this story a lot.
I have a feeling Blake's guardian is an alien and have a suspicion that Blake is also. I also think Blake is slightly older than he believes himself to be.
Looking forward to reading more chapters.
I have a feeling Blake's guardian is an alien and have a suspicion that Blake is also. I also think Blake is slightly older than he believes himself to be.
Looking forward to reading more chapters.
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May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Had a feeling that was what was in the crate. I hope their new passenger doesn't cause trouble. Seeing Fen and his little Earthling together is so sweet. Look forward to more :)
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May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha, I love Zari, can't wait to meet Mom ^_^
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May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! You update fast! I luv you for it because I hate getting drawn into a story and it's not updated for months or even years!
I hope Fen can rescue Blake from the pirates before he's sold or worse things happen to him!
I love the action and detail to this story too. You are an excellent writer who knows how to bring a story to life with vivid characters and details. Kudos to you.
I hope Fen can rescue Blake from the pirates before he's sold or worse things happen to him!
I love the action and detail to this story too. You are an excellent writer who knows how to bring a story to life with vivid characters and details. Kudos to you.
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May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well I for one was not expecting that. Here's me crossing my fingers that you update again today!! Good job BTW!! :D
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May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WELL THAT WAS WOW THAT REALLY GOT TO ME! I'm hoping Zari got help and that maybe the buyer is one of her friends or some variance there of.... I think I'm going to have to check the tag lines again.... I'm still loving this story as well! I was thinking there for a moment that they were going to open the lock box, but I understood where Blake was coming from as to why he didn't want to. I'M SO HAPPY that they finally got to kiss! I really hope all is not lost! Can't wait to read more!
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May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Super crap. Not good, come on Zari! You've gotta do something!
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May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW another exciting installment! I am totally enjoying the interaction between Blake and Fen. I wonder if Blake is going to ever question his guardian about any of this or is Fen finally going to ask some questions? Are we going to find out how and why Blake and his guardian got here and if there is another space craft on Earth that may have some spare parts for Fen's ship? You're doing some great story telling that's for sure!