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for Between the Stars

by Alasdair-you

person Jess
schedule May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a good start - update soon please!
person anon-ish
schedule May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
TOTALLY LOVED THE "PLASTIC HOOKER" IDEA! I'm in the same boat as Kennedy I really don't like the rest of the crew especially after that last conversation. I look forward to reading the interactions Kennedy will have with the other crew members I mean they have a commissary right? I'm wondering if he's going to walk in on someone taking advantage of Trian and what he'll do. Oh and will we meet the person who's being transported? OH MY GOD I think I've just figured out why when Trian comes back to Kennedy and doesn't call him Kennedy like he's asked him to, it's because he erases his own memory after being in the crew's quarters.... This also explains why Trian takes a few moments to redefine his relationship with Kennedy. Top secret huh? Yeah I can't wait to know what's so top secret with Trian. If Kennedy is different from most people would the nano bot's hurt him as well?
person Chardae
schedule May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the story so far!
person Tahn
schedule May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, he's so cute! I'm thinking he's not the run of the mill AI. Something's up with him. I'm wondering if by malfunctioning they mean sentient? Can't wait to find out.
person Jess
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
If you wrote it, then I will have to read it!
person Tahn
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to this new story. I love all of your stories though.