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by Alasdair-you

person Moku_Sui
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really confused by Trian, how could people not notice he's learning? It's weird. I feel like if anything , the Commander would notice. Unless he's purposefully ignoring it.
person Tahn
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Maybe his payment for this job can be Trian?
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving this new story! I can't wait to find out more about Trian's "malfunction".
person Gslinger
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story a lot... but please finish the other one too
person Tahn
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
He seems happy that he said no. Makes me sad for what might be going on behind the scenes though. Ahh, the suspense is killing me.
person Zas
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this new story of yours. Is train going to be his lover hmm....
person Tahn
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
¬_¬ I'll get it eventually.
person Gslinger
schedule May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How do you manage to always write stories about things I like to read. With that Oh-so-special amount of delicious kink? G
person lila
schedule May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It loooks good so far, interesting worldbuiling, but I can't really get used to the first person narration and present tense doesnt really work here. It sounds kind of weird and takes some enjoyment from reading.
person anon-ish
schedule May 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ONCE AGAIN YOU HAVE MY RAPT ATTENTION! So does he have cat ears under his hair? Are they on top of his head or on the side? OH and already I am loving the smartass AI Trian! So I'm guessing we'll find out why they think Train is not working so well huh?