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I just finished reading this and I love it! Poor por payne. I hope his attackers are caught. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh god, this was a painful chapter to read not to mention heartbreaking. All I ask is that there be some retribution in your story for the horror that Payne had to go through and I wouldn't mind that it would be by the hands of Matt. ;) Thank you for this update and very much looking forward to the next one.

Oh jeeze man. No one deserves that. I hope Sam gets his head knocked in, or has a serious wake up call. Also hope that all of his attackers, and his so called "friend" who knew it was gonna happen get caught, and some serious payback laid down.

Oh my God, those pedos are all going to rape Payne!!! Well, I guess he's in his early twenties, if that...still, they're pedos in my book!

They drugged him (did Baz know this?? Is that why he was giving Payne strange looks, maybe to warn him away from drinking?), and now they're going to rape him. Shit.

When he first got to the party I thought it was the same party that Cindy and her date were at. Guess not.

The call between Cindy and Matt had me all choked up. Their arrangement is sweet but sad. I'm glad Cindy found someone who obviously understands the situation. Too bad Steve never understood Matt's side of things.

Great chapter, CL! On to the next chapter! :)

I'm pretty sure the next body they find will be Ralphie's and Baz and Allen need to die a slow very painful death as well as all the ASSHOLES that took advantage of Payne! I'm sort of disappointed that Matt didn't really recognize Payne, I mean he thought the kid was cute didn't he? I mean hell he almost got to apologize at the mall till he was taken away to do more work. Didn't Payne tell the roommates who he was going with and who Baz was? OH and does Ralphie have GPS in his phone will they use that to find him? Is Payne's face so messed up that Matt doesn't realize it's him? OH and I'm a lil put out that he's trying to get some must be a guy thing huh?

All I want to know is did Baz know.

WOW I CAN ALREADY READ WHERE THAT IS GOING! Did they have that in mind the whole time? I mean did Allen threaten Baz? Why didn't they do the same thing to Ralphie? I love the plot of this story so far and the dynamics of everyone's situation well with the current exception but I knew what I was getting into... thank YOU for updating!

Hmm... I have a feeling that Baz knew what was going down (of course I don't think he had a choice but to do what he was ordered to do) and that this was all planned by his 'partner' and friends. Poor Payne. Thank you for the quick update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Uh oh, this is really really not good man. Always trust your gut!

I can see that this first chapter is just a start of what will be another fabulous story. Loved it. I am so looking forward to your next update.