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Ouch! This was a bit too much. Bastards!!!! So so happy this story is just - a story. Right now i want several people in this story dead! Poor poor payne (pain..) :'-(

Wow just when I thought it couldn't get better,it does! I hope you're not planning on making poor Payne suffer too much. The scene with his niece was very touching. She was sweet! I have a feelng both Baz and his boyfriend knw something. I'm with Matt in suspecting them. What a shock for Payne to see what was done to him. Hope the video helps catch the people who hurt him.

I don't know why I didn't notice this previously - Lisa and Mel are great friends and roommates. My sister's name is Melinda, but everyone calls her 'Mel'. lol

Anywho...this was definitely another emotional chapter. Payne's mind was so close to shutting down before, now with the DVD that was sent to him, that was like the last straw. I don't know how anyone is going to get him back. Maybe Caitlyn? Maybe through sign language, since he prefers it to speaking.

So obviously all of this was planned out. Those pervs were making movies and posting them online for money? Sick fucks.

I'd still be worried about Ralphie. Just b/c his parents "heard" from him doesn't mean he's not being held captive somewhere.

I loved how Matt could tell when Baz was lying. My kids were addicted to the show "Lie to Me", and they found it fascinating how you could sort of read a person through their body language.

Another excellent chapter, CL! :)

**Chapter 5**

I really do not know how Matt will come back from this. His sanity has been eroded away from so many directions that for him to come back will take what he may not have left in his psychological reserves. He is not on the edge any more. He has been pushed over the precipice.

Thank you for your update.

OH I had a bit of a sniffle when he smacked Lisa and she still told him she loved him, because its just so sad. How nasty to send a DVD as well....I hope Matt gets his hands on those bastards and rips some vital bits off. I know there's meant to be all this justice and the law and shit...but there are people like that out there and I personally agree with just let someone rip them to pieces they deserve no less.

Poor baby Payne, I hope when he sees Matt he'll start feeling slightly safe again, that there's a little light at the end of the tunnel for him.

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Chapter 5. You really do know how to bring out emotions in your readers don't you. The pain, frustration, sadness, heartache and especially anger. I can't tell you how disgusted and angry I felt while reading the last portion of this chapter when Payne was watching the video of what happened to him. I really REALLY want to see these sick monsters caught and right now I say to hell with going by the law. I don't want to see them going through a court trial, I want to see payback in the worst way possible and as I have said before, I would not mind if it's by the hands of Matt. My heart goes out to Payne and his family. :( Thank you again for this update and so looking forward to the next chapter.

I live this story! I just have the hardest time stopping reading this. I can't wait to see how they actually meet. I also can't wait to see what happens with the attackers

Oh Jesus. That's so horrible. My heart hurts for him. I hope he will finally get to see his gigantor now. I also hope that that video catches them all.

I just had to read this again, it got better the second time. Its so emotional and compelling. You do add a pefect amount of what the story needs , as it was pointed out. Clever.

Ok soo I cannot believe I missed this...I always keep an eye out for your stuff and the first chapter is just all aww and oh and pretty cool. I adore Payne I think he has to be one of my faveourites, just because he's a little bit crazy! I shall review when I have finished the other chapters!

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