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I knew something bad had to have happened to him. This is so very not good. I wonder how Payne's gonna take the news, plus now he's face to face with "Gigantor." Can't wait to see how that goes down.

Awwwwwwww noooooo! Holy shit! Cliffhanger...party of 1! Update soooooon please♥

**Chapter 6**

They finally meet. This may feel surreal to Payne as the occupant of his frenzied mind is a reality in his home. Do not believe Matt will say anything about his attendance at the hospital in the presence of the Payne’s parents and Stella – why would he? So, for the time being, do believe it is something that may go unsaid between them, while the preconscious thoughts of each other will prove a great influence on their interaction now.

Do look forward to how they will connect in this reality as they seem to have a connection that seems almost transcendent in nature.

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter.

I just found this today and holy crap!!! I could NOT stop reading! Fantastic story, it is so entertaining and very well written! Keep up the great work I can not wait for more!! You defiantly have a new fan!

OH Gosh, sounds like there's drama coming up. However I want to point out that I have noticed that you may firstly like the Penguins of Madagascar because of Kowalski :D and then you pop in Disney's Phineas and Ferb Tri State Area :D Just saying, it made me smile.

The comment about being so deep in the closet that he is living in Narnia made me laugh so much, I ended up sharing it with friend's in a What's app group. It is now our official faveourite sentence for someone who we think is repressed :D.

Loved the little scene where Payne thought he was dreaming. Also I thought since last time, that poor boy is pronounced Pain and went through so much of his name sake, talk about shit luck with a name as well. I am now wondering if Payne is going to say his first words to Matt. I can't believe Ralphy's been hurt too, very sad but sadder for Payne...just because I've come to love him lots and Lisa, we love Lisa because she is the most amazing best friend ever.

Hugs Aduial

Thank God, I really thought Ralph was going to turn up dead or end up being trafficked. I know he's in a coma but hopefully he'll wake up and be able to help. I didn't expect him to turn up so soon.
After avoiding this story at first I decided to give it go, I've just read through the whole thing.
I like it especially the references to beauty and the beast.
I'm not great at reviews but I just had to put down what I thought when I read the end of the last chapter.
Poor Payne though having to hear that the way he did,(I am only assuming he heard) it seems that every time he tries to get himself back to some sort of normalcy, even if he's just faking it to make others feel better, he gets knocked back again.

Wow what an emotional chapter. Job well done. What a shock to find out what happen to Stellas friend, no wonder shes commmited to the case. And Matt coming out to her. That was so brave of him. Again, chapter well done.

I really like how this one is going i know your usually a really quick updater but I can't wait for the next chapter of this one. They can't come fast enough

Omg

Wow...thats fucking crazy! Smug bastards sent a fucking video of it to the victim!?! Poor Payne...I would have reacted the same way. On to a lighter note...it was so sweet how you described when his niece was in the hospital and he knew she wouldnt be able to hear soon so he kept whispering that he loved her because if he was losing his hearing thats the last thing he would want to hear from someone he knew did love him...I got tears on that one. Please update soon and thank you for sharing your talent with us♥