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for Picking Up the Pieces

by CL.Mustafic

person Tahn
schedule May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see where this one takes us. I'll be along for the ride though.
person anon-ish
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW ALRIGHT I NEED MORE NOW! This the start of an awesome awesome awesome story! I love the fact that you gave Matt a scar and that he saw Payton in the bar and how Payton freaked a lil bit. I was worried that they would never get the chance to change how they first sort of met... I'm glad Payton was able to give Matt a small smile in the end of the chapter! I look forward to reading more!
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ya got another winner here, CL! :)

Love it so far!!

Matt seems like a gentle giant, and it's good that Payne (Payton, Paysley - lol) got a chance to see this. I'm wondering how old Matt is; he's gotta be at least in his thirties, right?

I love Payne's girlfriends/roommates! Especially Lisa - she's so cool! lol Seriously though, they're all cool girls. It's pretty cool seeing my name in print though. lol

I'm looking forward to chapter two!! :)