rate_review Reviews

Let me preface this by saying that I kind of figured that this story would be a bit outside of my comfort zone when I began reading it. I'm going to try not to let my dislike of some of the subject matter color my review of your actual writing.

I think that your style is very good. I'm not one that goes for overly descriptive writing ie some times a chair's just a chair I don't need to know the color and texture of it unless it's some thing crucial to the story. I think you strike a good balance of being descriptive enough so I can picture the scene without going overboard. I also liked that given the subject of the story it didn't just read like porn, there was an actual story behind it.

I didn't see too many mistakes either with your grammar or word usage so that was refreshing. All in all if you wrote something that didn't make me squick out I'd probably read it. But to each their own and good on ya for writing what you want and putting it out there for people like me to dislike. LOL I'm kidding really it didn't freak me out too much just a bit. I also know it was my choice to read it and just so you know, I'd do it again. :D

CL

I think we are getting back to some of the good stuff!

Yup, Quinn is going to be stuffed just like she was destined to be. Oh, oh, oh, Claire knows who Quinn Kane is!!!!!!!! Well, Quinn wanted to be a movie star and I think she just got her wish, LOL.

How is chapter 6 coming along? Will it be posted soon? Are you still going to continue this story or were you too upset with what you thought were negative reviews and have decided to put it on hold for now? I wasn't complaining just didn't like the addition of Alice and her father, and wanted the story to focus on the perils of Quinn, and only Quinn, which is what attracted me in the first place. I guess when a child enters the picture it makes the story seem to real and it's not as fun to read.

Hello and Happy Memorial Day!

I don't usually read stories featuring a female protagonist in these types of situations which is usually taboo with me but told myself to be brave and to just go ahead and click the story to find out what it was all about. I can now proudly admit that I did and thanks to you I have discovered a new fandom that I had thought I would never actually enjoy reading. I look forward to seeing how this progresses.

It's my new secret addiction thanks to you.

I am not usually into reading these sort of stories but being the curious person that I am I checked it out and lo and behold I am hooked. You've got guts writing this sort of fiction much less publishing it. Cheers for being so daring and taking a chance. You are very creative too and it's very well written with vivid and graphic details including describing the scenery. I hope this continues.

Thanks for the warning tag and I should had heeded them. I did read chapter 4 to see what kind of trouble Quinn would find herself but now wish I didn't and am sorry to admit that story is now ruined for me.

Not quite what I was expecting..... slightly disappointed but will wait to see how this plays out in next update.

I was talking about about chapter 4 not the story itself!

Dude, I would love to read more of Quinn's unfortunate series of events very soon. Will body modification be featured in this story?

Yo, I was just wondering whether Quinn will be running into Mr. Sunglasses and friends again from the The Purple Dolphin. You don't have to answer because it's probably a spoiler and I will continue reading to find out. I was thinking they might come across her while she was wandering around the glades.......