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for Shadows In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. Loved the wedding scene. Still do not know if I can trust Charles. Also would hate to see anything happen to Sarah and Cat when they go back to DC.

It was nice to see that Charles' family was included in the wedding. Also so the Grandmas are going with Sarah and Charles to keep an eye on them. Which grannies. May/June and who else. Another Android going against the bad guys.
Will be awaiting the release of the next chapter. Hope that you are feeling better after your operation and the flood of the area.

Keep it coming but not at an endangerment to your health. And keep DA happy with her upcoming motherhood. Best of luck to all of you.
person paul
schedule September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great to see you back its been so long thought you had given up but a great come back chapter please let us have some more very very soon
schedule September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Glad your back. Another great chapter. Nice that Alice came back (did't see that coming in the way it did) nice save. Thanks
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think You are one wonderful author! I love the in the grass stories. I hope you will be posting more of SHADOWS IN THE GRASS. I miss the new chapter every couple of weeks. Thanks Tom
person paul
schedule August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
whats happened to you got some serious withdrawal symptoms here missing this story so much please post some new chapters
person Roger
schedule August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well King of the cliffhangers strikes again !!!!! Chpt. 11 OUTSTANDING keep up the great work I look forward to every chpr.
person paul
schedule August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yet another amazing chapter cant believe you left it like that but I suppose I should know better by now cant wait for the next chapter many thanks
person paul
schedule July 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yet another amazing chapter your writing and imagination just seem to get better and better please please keep them coming and just a little faster lol many thanks best ive read by a long long way
schedule July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great Love your story Please keep this saga going. Thanks
person paul
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
brilliant brilliant brilliant cant think of any other way of explaining what you have achieved, so riveting just could not stop until I had finished more please very very soon thankyou so very much