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July 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So damn glad you are back! Hope all is good again with you!
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July 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Haven't changed even thought it's been over 6 months. See you're sistong DA as a coauthor. After your 6+ month "vacation" one would think you wuld stsrt spitting chapters out machine gun style.
Waiting on the next one.
B
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July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was starting to worry. . . actually I was well past worried. . .
Thank you very much for the effort to continue the story.
Cheers!
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July 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you back and a brilliant start let's hope many more to come and soon please
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February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
"We" really need an update on the fate of the girls in the plane.
Of course I know you have been on vacation sitting on the beach sipping exotic cocktails. SMILE
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November 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can not wait for the next one. Need to find out who survived the crash. As stated before am not that interested in the scam plot of the story. I still believe that Charles is the mole and now his boss wants to get rid of him also. It looks like the dogs or war is being released and I pity the people that run up against the fire power coming to rescue the family members. Hop that no one is hurt that bad. IF they are I am sure that Max and Alice will start nuking anything in the area to get at the bad people. Keep them coming.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You did it again. Great chapter and the cliff hanger ending. Thanks keep them coming please.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And another cliffhanger. Who the hell other than the government has that many G to A missals ??? OR were they A to A from a stealth>?
Is the family OK > Just dont wait as long for the next chapter.
B
Is the family OK > Just dont wait as long for the next chapter.
B
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October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't bad for a fill-in story although I too could do without the sidetrack blackmail story. Wish that we could get back into the main story line for a few chapters.
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October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. not much action but satisfying. Just the grass fix I needed