HOT DAMN!! All the big dogs in one room. With the little robots scannomg them all the truth may come out.
I wonder if there eill be anything left of the oval office. I have to go back and reread the last chapter.
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O.K. now, I'm slightly worried that one or more main characters will be killed off. Please don't let that happen. Max will just have to create something that will prevent that from happening. And what about Mel? That cannot be allowed to happen.
I find myself holding my breath until I get through each chapter because they are always on the edge of danger. So no pressure, but I can't wait until you finish this story like you did for "Girls in the Grass" so I can read it cover to cover and just enjoy it without stressing myself out chapter after chapter.
Another chapter of great writing, I love all these amazing and loving characters, Shelley
ANOUTHER GRATRE CHAPTER!
- Thank the God's your back and better than ever. Love the new chapters keep up the great work !!!!!!!!
The 'Boy in the Grass' series was execellent until Becca made the appearance and became a part of what Max and Emma had. While I don't mind the sharing, I think Max and Emmas relationship should be between them only. Then I got my wish when Becca found her 'soulmate'.
Which brings me to the 'Girls in the Grass series. Another great read until Petra. I can't express how much I hate her character. I find myself skipping ahead when she's in a scene because it's annoying that she must be mentioned in the same sentence as Emma. Let Max and Emma share what they have together by themselves.
Now I find myself at the 'Shadows' series questioning whether I should continue. Don't get me wrong, this is a great read and I was estatic when I found it again on this site. It's just the fact that Max has to share his marriage which annoys me to no end. Let Petra find her own 'soulmate' just like Becca has. It feels like Max never gets alone time with Emma only because of Petras clingyness. All the other couples get their alone time, but what about Emma.
Anyway great story and continue your success.
OK A little filler while we gather for the upcoming storm.? 12LE and 2 FBI in the same place ! Really and the druggies still dare to walk the street around there. They must have large brass ones. Pretty obvious now the head is an inside guy. Do you have Alice smoke him out and then the twins go in and commit multiple "war crimes" on the living body before they terminate it ?? The dual fatherhood scenario should prove VERY interesting. I thought there was going to be some bad guys going down in this chapter. Interesting ground work being laid.
Waiting on the next one
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So glad you are back. I missed Max and his family. You still are best at cliff hanging endings. can't wait for the next chaapter, Thanks
I absolutely love this story from "Girls in the Grass" to this one "Shadows in the Grass". It's one of the most amazing, phenomenal and addictive books I've ever read. It makes me smile and I feel so happy when I see another new chapter. I love these characters you have created that make up this wonderful family and I love this fantastic world you have crafted for them and your readers. Never stop writing and thank you Dirty Angel for contributing to this wonderfully entertaining, fun and addictive novel. --- Shelley
OK The shit is in the fan now. Only question is 2who/what is it going to splatter on ??? I think Carol is gong to take care of some of the problem ad the newly recovered mother is going ro play an important part in gettong Oaks calmed down.
Is Washington going to become the smoking ruin it desvers to be?
AND of course the big question is the next chapter going to be posted TOMORROW???
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Welcome back. It is nice to see that Kari is now the co-author of the story. Nice chapter. Loved the twins in their power suite. I like to see what happens with the court paperworks for renew parental rights with Carol involved. Hate to be in that courtroom. Also hope that Tat is goive to pull through. If not I really wouold not like to be on the receiving end of Rick's anger over losing her.
Still think that Charles in the mole. But what would really be funny is if Max's dad is the overall boss trying to get his toys back.
But like I have said in the pass, since you are the writer and now that Kari is helping you that beteween the two of you, you know which way the story is going and will keep up hanging on at the further cliffhangers that you two will come up with.
Will be awaiting the next chapter.
Also will be awaiting for more on Northstar and from Kari on Choices.
Again welcome back to you and your family and hope that all your health problems are getting better and wish you and your family good health in he future.