Just found max's stories agin. Powered thru to the end. I hope this story gets picked up again. It has become one of my favorite.
Okay, I don't know what exactly is going on currently with the authour's personal life, however I did research and am getting worried whether or not Shadows in the Grass will be continued or not. I really hope it is; I've been really enjoying the books up to this point & that last cliffhanger is driving me crazy.
I REALLY hope you can continue working on this, and hope even more you can finish it, Magusfang; it's a massive dissapointment to get invested into something and have it never be resolved. :(
Where is the rest?
awesome, thank you for writing the in the grass series, i check in daily for updates in anticipation of a new chapter
Hello magusfang, recently I have discovered your "in the grass" serious as I call it and have read all of it over this past week with great ferver. After reading until this point I have found great interest in your story. I my self identify with max quite a bit while I am nowhere near as scarred or smart as him I am under stand the need to protect ones family and how to deal with pain both physical and emotional/mental.
I would like to express my praise and observations if you please accept them
praise: I commend you for fabricating a work with max and his family along with the trilling violence and strong passions. While many "quick-fap" readers just come looking for some lifeless sex you have made and environment conducive to a uncanny form of love in various forms. I say the violence is just right for me and about half the time the sex satisfies my emotions with your characters.
observations: while max is growing I remember not too long ago being 17 and being in very strong control of my pains and feelings yet at whim able to express everything I wanted and hated. While I have no issue with the relations of every character at no point has max every sat down with his harem and set boundaries, expectations, or just asked straight out for what he wants and deserves ( while I don't expect max to ever do it I would expect Emma, nadi, or legion forcing to confront his fears and dislikes because his happiness is tied to the girls happiness and they "should" want him to be happy) although I do expect many cliffhangers I don't believe that any time you have a sex scene you should cut through it part way [do all or none]. And lastly please let max come to a full understanding to the dynamics of his family (maybe at a price or as a reward) and also Petra is a unique and welcomed addition in my opinion but to be frank her dick ing the girls and her dick in and of itself needs to be addressed by max(while I have only a little issue with the current way Max's harem works I personally find that love can be expressed more easily and more intensely when you sit down and talk about what happens and how they feel. Just to be clear I have no issue with Petra being a hermaphrodite. If I was in Max's place (while I am not max I understand him and he needs to grow and grow immediately after or during his dealing with the shadow group if he lives)
lastly I have read some succeeding pieces involving polygamy and the best ones involve clear wants and desires and I understand your writing and I I courage to keep it just please if you want to enthrall more readers before you throw them a cliffhanger give some sort of relief (give and take)
best of luck and just remember my opinion is just an opinion and your ideas are yours alone I just want your world to grow see greater depth, love, and places it needs to go - just a guy with some advice -J
OK I knew you were going to find a way around the obvious and as always you did just not what my small mind envisioned. Always the MASTER of suprise. Eaiting for the next one.
Just had another thought . Nanites already invaded his body and cut nerve control to trigger finger?? You aren't going to let Chatlrd die - are you??
B
Let me guess. Nanites involved with the gun. Wont fire of will blow up. Looks like the bad guy has
been uncovered or has he? Is he just a puppet?? Cliffhangers Inc will ldet us know in the next installment.
B
Welcome back. Hope that you are feeling better. Hope that your treatments are coming along better each day.
Really enjoyed this chapter. Nice to see that no one diedin this one.
Cant wait to see what happens with Mel and her mother. Also nice to see that Suzy and Tat are going to be mommys with Ricks children..One girl and one boy would be nice.
Really hate to be the bad guy in the oval office when they are finished with him. Still hate to think that it is Charles.
Will be waiting for the next chapter. Bring it out in your own time and only if it does not tax your health to much. I am sure that Kari, Liz and little Money and Mouse give you great loving each day.
Keep the faith and get better for all your friends and love ones.