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by ChrissyQuinn

person Tahn
schedule July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was hawt, and I do believe Collete has lost her damn mind.
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So nick I being an ass, he's so still a sun crosser isn't he?
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I still hate him. :P

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person JLinz
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Again, I have actual tears in my eyes. That... that hit me in my chest, Chrissy.

The threesome was cheek-achingly awesome. I would say that it was out of character for Autumn but she was extremely wasted... and I've done some crazy things when I used to get drunk like that so... quite understandable. To the point where I think Garrett and Evan put something in those drinks; she was perfectly fine after six (SIX???) cherry mojitos! I would've already had my head resting on the bar after five!

151 and pineapple, huh? I've had it with Dr. Pepper and cranberry juice (separately). But, um... I don't do too well on 151 so I'll leave it at that. She's a trooper...
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well this is my first solo review and I'm sniveling like a baby. Was doing ok until the last part with the video, great story, I just want it to keep going!
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, Collette off the deep end should be fun! Oh and the awkward morning after, been there done that; you should have them warm up to each other. Gotta say laughed in this chapter almost as much as cried in the last one
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok first you said he was missing, now aleski is dead? mean. But you made up for it with crazy collette. Thought maybe the drunk threesome was a little strange for Autumn but after thinking about it, I can see where she might be depressed enough to just say fuck it.
person delaney
schedule July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Absoutly sobbing right now my heart is shattered, you could make an amazing book.
person Mona Thompson
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw fuck...I just cant believe he is gone. I cried during this whole chapter. Especially when he said he was sorry they would never have their little boy. Ugh it killed me! Fuck Nikolai. And I sure wish Vlad would come back for real and kick a few asses. Wishful thinking...I know♥
person Tahn
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
...You are gonna make me cry man. I'm glad you added to the dream, it was beautiful and well done. I love how Leslie addresses all of the major gripes everyone has in one paragraph. I also like what you did with the flashdrive, letting people know that he wasn't as big of a douche as he let on. Seriously, on the verge of tears right now.