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Let's see...

Lady Glenning: should be saved for last; shouldn't be beheaded, as she wasn't a true queen and it would be a quick death; should be made to watch as all her titles and properties are bestowed upon the son she abhorred (provided Mack survives this)...

Hiram and the other lierian traitors: take a broomstick and see if they think a broken pelvis is a laughing matter after that; should be kept in cells in the Old Keep, fed only with meat (as far as I know lierians are red meat intollerant)...

Temple guards: should be cloistered in the temples they love so much, with no way out, see them end up defiling those same temples with their own feces, the same for the royal guards who turned a blind eye to the killing of Atara's cult members (Fox did worry about how noone saw the people who left Maya's corpse in the castle grounds)...

ps: I still wonder, were the 3 rats from the beach incident related to those council members? they did seem awfully protective of them, and what happened to the big one? we want to see (read).

oh, I forgot: Happy Mother's Day, Cyril!!!

Oh shit! I cried so hard when they found Atara and he was saying you come every day...your not real. Ugh...what an amazing chapter! And poor Kita...I really hope he id okay. Poor guy! I cant even imagine the pain. I know I have said it before...but this would mske one HELL of a movie! Soooo excited for the next chapter :)♥

"Lady Glenning: should be saved for last; shouldn't be beheaded, as she wasn't a true queen and it would be a quick death; should be made to watch as all her titles and properties are bestowed upon the son she abhorred (provided Mack survives this)...

Hiram and the other lierian traitors: take a broomstick and see if they think a broken pelvis is a laughing matter after that; should be kept in cells in the Old Keep, fed only with meat (as far as I know lierians are red meat intollerant)..."

Oh I really like these. Add slow painful torture for Glenning and making Hiram and his tools the only legal residents of the whore houses and it's perfect. Maybe if someone lets a bunch of blood thirsty animals "breed" them they will think a little diff.

Oh, poor Kita. But now Emory can say that he knows that Kita has felt the pain of being ripped apart, he knows someone has suffered the same, or even more, than he did. As sick as it sounds, it might give him a bit of closure about it. But now he's gonna feel guilty, because he did it for him. It's amazing what one little walk on the beach led to. I hope that when you kill Lady Glenning and all those under her, that you let the city's people take part as well. They've all lost their people, their homes, and the peace they had grown so accustomed to.

WELL HOLY SHIT ON A CRACKER! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! The detail you put into the fight scenes I could feel the heat and the smoke I swear! I'm sweating right now and if I didn't know better..... I swear it was blood spray! But I've got the fan going so... Anywho like I said before thank you for making that kid a Glacian! I honestly laughed when he called Emory Kitten! It was just one of those the world is going to shit and some body just say's that right thing and it makes you smile if even for a moment.... I was worried there for a moment I though Mack might have put Kita out of he misery there when he got the nitey-nite drug.... Because he even thought about doing the same to Emory at one point... I'm also relieved that Atara is un-taken but that was one hell of a scene when he said they brought Fox's head down to show him, yeah that's more then fucked up but it makes for great story telling though! Are you going to tell us what happened from Atara's point of view and or maybe Fox's before he was killed when I'm sure he was next to Atara maybe in the same cell or next to it? I would really like to read that, I truly do like reading from their points of view! Thank YOU again! I hope your kid's are doing okay as well as you!

T_T Knew I was gonna cry. That whole family is gonna be scary when they find out. Poor Fox. That woman is gonna die a very painful death for all of the murders committed in her name, but Fox is the one that she's gonna be most condemned for. I know you made a promise to me once that Cyril wasn't gonna die, and since the two I had in my head that might die were Fox or him, I shoulda known who it would be. I'm off to cry in a dark corner now, and mourn the loss of Fox.

You are a very gifted author. I just started reading these stories. Your writing pulls me in and I just can't get enough. Fox's death was tragic but it added so much depth to the story. You have a brilliant way of developing characters. Needless to say I can't wait to see what happens next. And I believe Cyril will heal in time knowing both of his sons are alive. I hope they can get Atara out of there before they can mess him up. I hope Cyril goes apeshit on Lady douchecarcass 😆

Oh my god you killed fox!!!! Well it kind of was expected and it is better than mack dieing but I'm still sad for Cyril!! I'm glad Kita killed the guy who behadded fox^^ I hope they will be in time to rescue Atara and Kita!!! I don't want Atara to suffer through a rite I wand sweet mack atara babys^^ Maybe we are lucky and he is already pregnant and doesn't get into heat but thats probably wishfull thinking!!! Great double update^^ See you again tomorrow!!!

oh my god

it was so sad but so good at the same time.

poor Fox and poor Cyril . it is so hard for him to live without his love . i hope everything get better for them