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May 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definitely shed some tears this chapter. So incredibly sad reading about Cyril's grief. The dream portion nearly tore me in half but I'm super happy with the end. He realizes that even though he most likely will never get over it his boys still need him and that's the best thing.
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! Another cry chapter! My heart is just so broken for all of them but especially Cryl! I don't know how you planned to do this all in Atara's pov, I love Emory's pov!
And hey, if there is one thing I learned from doing yaoi role plays it is that the narrator can make anything they want happen! And it's also where I learned all the smutty, kinky stuff! ;)
As much as I love Mack and Atara, I can't wait for some good Kita and Emory smut! And good to know he will just need a c-section, ne?
I know it is coming but I'm really not looking forward to that Cryil pov chapter! It's bad enough I broke into tears on my way to work yesterday thinking about Fox! I already miss him too!
And hey, if there is one thing I learned from doing yaoi role plays it is that the narrator can make anything they want happen! And it's also where I learned all the smutty, kinky stuff! ;)
As much as I love Mack and Atara, I can't wait for some good Kita and Emory smut! And good to know he will just need a c-section, ne?
I know it is coming but I'm really not looking forward to that Cryil pov chapter! It's bad enough I broke into tears on my way to work yesterday thinking about Fox! I already miss him too!
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah so fantastic. Loved the blood bath of the last chapter and this chapter was so heart felt with Cyril and Nikita getting taken care of by Emory. To be honest I completely thought that Nikita's hands were gonna be like cut off or some shit so I'm glad he's still got them even if they're a broken mess. Can't wait for the next chapter
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah so fantastic. Loved the blood bath of the last chapter and this chapter was so heart felt with Cyril and Nikita getting taken care of by Emory. To be honest I completely thought that Nikita's hands were gonna be like cut off or some shit so I'm glad he's still got them even if they're a broken mess. Can't wait for the next chapter
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Kits look better and happy to hear Atara was not taken advantage of.
Everything well described. Fox's death still the tearing part ;)
The division of the two crowns has me with conflicting emotions. Now, they will never unite again?
The Infinito title is passed from father to son (or is it now changed?). With Fox and Cyril reunion I hoped for this two titles to unite in one person. It makes me a bit sad to imagine the growing distance between the Infiniti and the King, two generations from now. Anita and Emory live together because they are brothers and young. Their sons have no motive to remain at the palace together. The palace is residence of the king. And the future Infinito?
Everything well described. Fox's death still the tearing part ;)
The division of the two crowns has me with conflicting emotions. Now, they will never unite again?
The Infinito title is passed from father to son (or is it now changed?). With Fox and Cyril reunion I hoped for this two titles to unite in one person. It makes me a bit sad to imagine the growing distance between the Infiniti and the King, two generations from now. Anita and Emory live together because they are brothers and young. Their sons have no motive to remain at the palace together. The palace is residence of the king. And the future Infinito?
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awe so glad Nikita's okay. And you had me getting teared up with Cyril talking about how he can't go back into their room. :(
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have been meaning to ask this but im usually so sidetracked because im reviewing a chapter I have just read which are ALWAYS amazing and I forget to ask this every godsdamned time so Im on here for this reason only...to ask what crosses my mind every so often! And please be patient while I sound like a 7 year old...where do their babies come from? The Infinitos babies I mean:) are their bodies different than other Lierans? I mean clearly they are or they wouldnt be The Infinito sooooo I was just wanting to know how the baby got out...or rather WHERE it got out? That sounds silly to ask...im actually giggeling to myself while im typing this!♥
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May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I'm so glad the are both ok!!! Well Kita is not ok but he is getting there!!!! I really liked the scene with the guard who didn't know who to adress^^ That was funny!!!! I'm glad Emmy is back on his feet!!!! See you again tomorrow!!!
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May 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
it was great great but at the same time so sad but i loved it.
my heart broke for Kita , he is loyal a kind lover i hope he get better
it was great great but at the same time so sad but i loved it.
my heart broke for Kita , he is loyal a kind lover i hope he get better
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May 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Finally a chapter I didn't cry my fucking brains out at! I'm so glad the rite didn't begin yet! It's bad enough that Atara was forced to the suffering of Fox and Kita! By the way, I think it would be better if the Queen was skinned alive with a serrated knife, that fucking cunt!
And I know how you feel-time does not heal wounds. You just learn to keep living and do everything to hold onto the good. My brothers and I have always been close, but when we lost my oldest brother we all became inseparable. We are all a little broken, we will always be without my oldest brother but we help pull each other threw life. I'm glad you use this creative outlet for your grief. I actually portray a lot of my own grief through my role plays. My thoughts are with you love!
Oh and if incarnation exists in your little world I hope Emory would have a little Fox. I know he is supposed to be barren and he also had a miscarriage which would make things so much more complicated a second time but! These halflings are different creatures and the infinitoes main purpose is to have a heir...so maybe Emory will have the power to put a child into another man? I mean Kita can take it. And I was thinking how you have to do a scene when Fox hits heat because he is either going to have to let Kita top him or use Kita essence as a lube to finger himself and gods would that be hot? Just giving you some ideas! ;)
And I know how you feel-time does not heal wounds. You just learn to keep living and do everything to hold onto the good. My brothers and I have always been close, but when we lost my oldest brother we all became inseparable. We are all a little broken, we will always be without my oldest brother but we help pull each other threw life. I'm glad you use this creative outlet for your grief. I actually portray a lot of my own grief through my role plays. My thoughts are with you love!
Oh and if incarnation exists in your little world I hope Emory would have a little Fox. I know he is supposed to be barren and he also had a miscarriage which would make things so much more complicated a second time but! These halflings are different creatures and the infinitoes main purpose is to have a heir...so maybe Emory will have the power to put a child into another man? I mean Kita can take it. And I was thinking how you have to do a scene when Fox hits heat because he is either going to have to let Kita top him or use Kita essence as a lube to finger himself and gods would that be hot? Just giving you some ideas! ;)