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for Beauty in the Ashes

by Alasdair-you

person Lurkey
schedule June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow, your writing is amazing! I can't wait for more (no pressure though, I know things don't always happen the way we want them to)
Of all the stories I've read on this site, yours is the first to prompt me out of lurking and make me leave a comment >< just wanted to let you know your work is much appriecated.
person angela
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hello dear

i am very glad , you and your family are ok . i hope everything get better , thanks for this chapter
person smint45
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update^^ I'm glad you are back^^ Hope to read you again soon!!!
person Candigirl
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love how the execution rolled out, literally. Mack deserved that kill, I think everyone will feel better Mack did it. Except maybe Atara. By the way, poor Atara! Why is our strong little infoneto withering away?! I feel like that job is also going to fall onto Emory's shoulder, but if it did I'm confident he could take it.

By the way, I hope everything is okay irl! I work in the claims department at progressive and we have been getting all sort of flood and hail damage! And your car! Gods I hope everything starts going right for you, but thankfully everyone is safe! That will always be what is most important! <3
person littleolmeee
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like you have been through heck in hand basket. I was wondering what had happened to you but, figured real life had you well in its grips & sounds like I was right. Don't apologize, sounds like your plate was full & then some. I'm glad everyone in your family is alright. Hope everything gets fixed quickly. The story is wonderful, loved the chapter. I know we are getting close to the end, I'm glad Emory is finding himself again, I hope his brother can get well too. Maybe he'd do well with a stay at the hospice with Mack. I'm shocked Mack did the honors but, I can't blame him for hating her. Thanks for the update, I look forward to more from you. Take care & be safe.
person Tahn
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, you go Mack! I have a feeling that's gonna haunt him at night, but he'll have someone beside him the whole way. Is Emory going into heat? But Nikita is in no shape to help. Gonna be a long heat with no help.
person raymareme
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG you updated! thank god!
person Moku_Sui
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're back! I wasn't expecting that of Mack, but now I'm concerned about how Atara will react since he seems so frail now :(
person reader
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
First things first, hopefully everybody is OK. Things in life happen and you have to deal with them. Second, so happy to see an update on this story. A great return to the story. Hopefully another update is up soon.
person MamaPisces
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very fitting. Strait to the point. Hope you all are feeling better.....And, welcome back.