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You know english is not my first tounge and I will probably leave a ton of typos in my review because I am on my phone but you have to know...

 

You have to know what your story did to me. I am still mourning over Fox. I just read your ALOGAK a week ago and loved, absolutely loved it. The rape (the first one) Cyril had, made me uneasy because I tought it would become a pattern with no one noticing and Cyril just taking it but then Fox happened, lovely, strong and smart Fox, he noticed right away and promised Cyril a safe heaven and right there I knew he was my favorite character from this story.

Cyril I liked too a lot but not really as bad as Fox. I sometimes felt he got overhysterical but then again maybe that was just his personality. I despised, dispise, will keep dispacing Kinon. I really, really deslike him and I clapped at Emmy when he said Kinon is not Fox and he never will be --I was like, that's it I couldnt say it better!

 

One of my concerns is now Fox is gone Cyril will go to Kinon, you are the author but I would really like for it not to happen... Um please (?)

Atara/Mack it was lovely and hot and you know this steady couple, kind of gives the vive of being married since like forever.

Emmy and Kita, my second favorites, they broke my heart. Su much angst but then again I love angst, I want a story of them aside from this one, I want Emmy to work for the love Kita so freely gave. I understand Emmy went trough sometic traumatic and awfull but Kita didn't deserve the fall out. I really liked them as paring.

 

And lastly but not lastly my favorites, the ones who took my heart in a wild ride and then smashed it against cold stone. Fox/Cyril. I cryed with them and felt happy with their joy, when they knew about Atara... I was so so happy. They are my otp from this lovely stories. And I would love some oneshot/short story about their early days with Atara being a baby and Emmy a child, just pure fluff to heal me a little bit... Wishfull thinking but hey! I can dream, right?!

Thanks for writing and sharing! It was a wild ride and enjoyed it dearly. I will wait for more!

Cheers! Have a nice night :)!

thank you for this great and well-written story. I can't wait for the update!

Sob. You don't have an MCD OR an MiCD tag T_T I'll just go cry in the corner then and pretend this sequel doesn't exist.

Please some back -- the story seems almost finished. I miss your other works as well :/

oh my gosh. you broke my heart when Fox was killed. I cried like a baby for three chapters. I still tear up when I think about it. I feel in love with him and cyril(sp?). everything they went through and they didn't get their happy ending of growing old together -tears up-

you are an excellent writer. I feel like I'm actually there, it was so easy to fall in love with the characters, and I honestly don't want this story to end. everything was described perfectly; enough to imagine it but not so much as to overwhelm me.

this story is just beautifully tragic, and I'm sure I'll bee mourning Fox for days to come.

thank you for the excellent read.

Please please there HAS to be an ending...I need it! And I hope all is better with you and yours♥

Please update soon...I will die if this story is abandoned!♥

Please come back and finish your stories!

First I just want to say...I fucking love you (excuse my French) I just discovered your stories today and I'm still punching myself over not having found them sooner. You're writing is absolutely unbelievable. I feel like I know these characters and can feel all the hardships and pain they go through. To me it's as if they actually exist somewhere in an alternate world. I'm not ashamed to say I bawled like a baby when Fox died and continued to do so for several more chapters. I was so sad, but I understood why it had to happen. It still makes me sad though and knowing firsthand the experience of losing someone so important, well, I guess it kinda hit me emotionally. I seriously don't have words to say how much I love you and your writing. Aaahh there's so much I want to say, but I won't make you suffer through reading an entire essay :P thank you for this amazing story!

I'm so sorry to hear about your series of unfortunate events! But I honestly can not keep silent about your stories any longer. You are an incredible writer. Somehow you are able to evoke so many emotions from writing, and that is not an easy thing to do. I have cried and laughed through this story (and the one before it) and I can't wait to see how it goes.