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Knew something was gonna happen to Emory. I really hope he can come back from this, and that the people who hurt him will be found. I also hope Atara can come back from killing someone. Man, what a way to start a story, so much pain, and it's only the second chapter. I hope there's a happy ending somewhere. I look forward to more.

Noooo don't do it!

Great story!

Oh my gosh...I can't tell you how happy I am that this is up!! I'm gonna be honest, I'm a little afraid of what's to come. After glancing at the tags, and Atara's ominous words of something that is about to happen...I'm really scared man. Please don't kill Emory! But overall, interesting first chapter. I'm excited/nervous to read the next one!

I'm feeling like this is going to be all sorts of sad here. Not sure if I can deal with that so soon after the happy ending to ALOGAK! I love your stories so i'll have to suck it up but please - not too sad!

Oh my god. Please don't kill Emory. Or hurt or maim him in any way...god this is already nerve wracking what with a cliff hanger like that! I already love it though so please sayyyy update tonight? ;) just kidding but that would be amazing. Love it but so fucking worried for Emory and Atara now

Oh my god u sure there werent any other horrible tags to put here for these poor brothers? dont dare to kill emory or arata or make them suffer the way their parents suffered? clear enough? Emory has my full support.dont lay a finger on him.ha ha ha.
seriously ? Ur going to made cyril cry again? Oh godssss

Daaaamnnn!!! I would be lying if I said I wasn't worried for these two princes! :( I hope nothing too traumatizing is about to happen. Quick question, (not sure if this will be answered in the story or not) does Emory have 'heats'? I'm guessing Atara is too young to have them yet (Cyril had them when he was 18, right?). I'm curious, which of them is more Lierian? I'm excited to see where this story is headed and what journey Atara will take. I'm VERY uneasy, too. SOOO uneasy :(