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Oh here we go again! In love with another one of your stories! I am very concerned here! I hope Emory will be alright!!!

Yeah My favorite writer is back! Can't wait for more! G

Damn. Poor Emory and poor Fox there at the end- such an emotional moment. So glad the younger brother got to kill one of those bastards, though i'm sure that will haunt him, too.

You can't kill Emory! Poor fox was already missing the first five years of his life, you can't just rip away the rest. And I know this is wishful thinking but it sounds like neither of the guys finished in him so I'm assuming he is safe from baring a child from one of those creeps??! But that makes me wonder how this ruins his life then, does he just shrivel up in fear from the outside world? Or runs away or just loses his mind and needs to be shipped away??? The anxiety!

Also, I don't like how Atara called Fox by his name, very disrespectful and from him I was assuming he'd be raised calling Fox his dad or father. I know it was probably meant to distinguish which father he was talking about but it seemed very unnatural. Just some personal feedback!

I'm so emotionally distressed right now I'm actually legitimately crying. WHY?!?! I cant! Emory is perfect! I can't handle this. Please update soon and....you know what just post the rest of the story and give Emory a happy ending. I have way too many feels right now I can't handle any of them. I can't focus. I'm shaking. I just...why?!? I'm crying again.

;_; that was terrible!!

I... an honestly not sure if I can read this one though I really want to see it through to the end if just the second chapter is like this...

Why you assholes why! I swear their stupid little tradition of passing their "god" around to pop out the next one really needs to go away and those 2 ***** need to die in an extended, very very slow, horribly painful way. They do that to their prince and dare to say Atara is the crazy one... really pisses me off. Emory better live to get one amazing wife/husband or whatever! Don't care as long as he ends up happy. ; ~ ;

D: Emoryyyyy!!! Good for you Atara rip their eyeballs out next time! Grr!!!

That was...really hard to read. I felt sick reading that whole scene. Emory, poor Emory. I hope Fox finds those other two and fucking murders them. Ugh, I'm so upset I don't know what to say.

... I don't even have words to express what I'm feeling right now. I was worried at first about even reading this story especially after seeing the tags but I love your stories so I read on. After chapter one I was a little more hesitant but I saw you updated and went for it. OMGosh!!! Poor Emory. I just want to cry. I thought it was sad reading about how each child has a favorite parent and how Atara isn't so close with his father but that was nothing compared to reading about one of them so destroyed both emotionally and physically. That was a hard blow to take. I'm kind of a wreck right now. Reading everything that happened to Cyril in ALOGAK was a breeze compared to chapter two of BITA. Maybe it was harder because we just finished reading about these kids being so loved, young and carefree and now in this book we have parental issues and heartbreak in the fist two chapters! Brutal, heartbreaking and sad are only a few words that come to mind right now. These characters need a break! HEA please!