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for Beauty in the Ashes

by Alasdair-you

person Moku_Sui
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god! But I'm really confused by Emory's anatomy. He can't have children anymore because of this? So What happens when he's in heat?
person Momo
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank God he's been tended to and it looks like he'll make a good recovery. Just hearing the word 'stitches'....fuck, I can't imagine the kind of damage that was done to him. I want to hug poor Emory. I love Mack. I'm interested to see where that goes...is he the love interest? I wasn't sure if he was just a new character or not. I feel so bad for Fox and Cyril... they seemed so upset (any parent would be). I can't wait for justice for Emory. Off with their heads!
person E.J
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really loved the first story and so far already loving this one!
person Tahn
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger!!! Noes!!! I'm loving him so far, your descriptions are well done, and I love that he's an artistic soul. I have a feeling bad things are about to happen though, and I'm gonna be sad to see the joy in Emory's eyes fade when whatever happens, happens.
person angela
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know it then, but agreeing to Emory's 'plan' would ruin his life. It would change mine forever.

oh my god i can not wait please update it . what would happen to them. ???? someone take them to another kingdom as slave?????? or sell them to a noble family ?????
person angela
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is going to be darker than land of gods and kings and i really like it . I like romantic story which are also dark .it is a d/s story and it makes me so happy.

please please do not kill Emory , and do not separated them from each other , it is hard to suffer alone if they stay with each other they would be more strong , i hope both of them end with big scary doms ( but kind at the same time)and both get pregnant ,haha i am devil i know .
person A
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, more life ruining :( Didn't we get enough of that in the last story?
person Poohkie87
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for continuing. I've been following the previous story and you do a great job. I am also interested that you took to Atara's POV versus Emory. This story should be fun
person cc1988
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love! it so far Atara's name is almost as cool as Cyril and Fox, lol. Emory is just as dashing. i can't wait to see what will happen to the boys sounds rather tragic
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you really made a sequel!
Interesting start already :)