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Great the adventure continues, I can't wait for more story. So is Mack going to be Atara's love interests?

Good chapter dear.now i feel much better because Emory is getting better.thank you.hope he finds a true love.and another thing cant we have a liitle fox and cyril moments again through this story? I kinda miss them together.

D*** right Atara should abolish their stupid tradition! I remember in the last story they though doing that kind of crap was okay because "sex is worship" but there is no way they can call what those 2 did to Emory "worship" in any way shape or form. If not for the fact that Atara was born those idiots would have caused the very last line of the "God" to die out screwing over the whole race causing wars and infighting like they had before Cyril came back. That kind of thing should not be overlooked by the rest of the populace they all should be out for blood!

GOOD GOD! I think this one is even better then the last one! The second chapter was intense! I wanted to beat their asses myself! I HOPE they get caught! I want justice for Emory and I want Atara to be able to possibly help heal Emory... I realize I'm asking for a lot but what can I say I'm hooked on your writing! I look forward to reading more when you get the chance!!!!

oh my boys! that chapter was rough, it looks as though emory won't be the same for a long time if ever :( and to be sexually assaulted in the front of your little brother is almost or horrifying than the act itself.i really do hope that both brothers will be able to not allow those assholes to ruin their lives from now on and that they both can heal from this gruesome incident. but on a lighter note 'atta boy!" Artara for bashing that scums head in!

oh my GOD

MY poor EMORY :((((((((( PLEASE LET HIM BE OK

can not wait for next chapter

Good Lord, that was a difficult chapter to read. If I could have climbed into the story I would have beat their asses myself. I was an emotional wreck. I cried for Emory. I cried for Atara and Fox then I thought about Cyril hearing what happened to his first born and cried for him too. I hope both Emory and Atara recover to live a happy and healthy life and the perpetrators are found and dealt with slowly and painfully.

P.S. Candigirl I know many people consider children referring to their parents by their given name as disrespectful but I don't think it is. Considering that he has two fathers it can help to distinguish between them. Some parents prefer it. Growing up my mother asked me to call her by her given name.

I've decided you're gathering too much Anons to know which Anon I'd be, so I'm renaming myself to AnonJ XD

T___T NOOOOO! WHY did that have to happen to Emory??? It was sad enough that Cyril had to go through that, now Emory too...
I think its even worse since we already know Emory when he was still a kid.

Emory won't have any more unfortunate events right? He's had his quota of bad stuff - right??

Heh- I'm still going to keep reading anyways, don't know why I'm asking....

Glad Emorys not dead and not traumatised to the point of becoming a half-dead person.

Is Mack going to be Atara's mate? Mmmm... no offence to all the Macks out there, but Mack isn't really my fav name >.< I end up thinking Mac like MacD's. Great for food but a little iffy when it comes to being the name of the love interest. My opinion anyways. Don't take it too seriously. Its your story after all, if the name Mack helps you with writing, I'd take that over a character name I like but would disrupt the flow of your writing progress haha!

I HOPE Lady Glenning get's her come up-in's very soon! I'm glad that Atara and Emory got to talk before the was put back to sleep... I really almost thought that Mack was going to be Atara's love interest... I wonder who Mack's dad was... What happened to Kinnon??? He wouldn't happen to be Mack's dad would he? I look forward to reading more when you get a chance!