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Yay! Emory's back! It's soothing to the soul after all that he's been through. You go Atara! Hehe, I love how he was talking about Mack right in front of him, that's gonna be entertaining to see how that gets settled.

This chapter was amazing. However, I'm just a little disappointed that Mack is falling for Atara when Emory needs more love and support right now. I'm just venting, because Emory doesn't have a significant other. I can clearly see that Atara and Mack or destiny to be together. Besides, Mack doesn't really care about the health or well fare of Emory. For crying out loud, he didn't even notice Emory was pregnant. Mack is way too concerned about Atara who is way too young in my opinion. Again, I'm just venting my frustrations with Atara and Mack.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss!!! I am cheering so hard right now! That a boy Emmy dust yourself off and fix up your brother while he fixes you! Who cares if he has no love interest for now when he's got the love and support of a little brother like Atara! I mean seriously, my own brother won't even take out the trash for me when he's the one who filled it in the first place let alone take on something major like the burden of ruling a nation or dealing with what basically amounts to a brainwashing sex cult with maiesiophilia issues aka the Lierians. That takes a lot of love to put up with. This chapter was really good and I only wish it could have been longer.

P.S. Sorry for the typos last time I was to upset/depressed to pay attention to any miss-clicked keys.

WHATTT You can't leave it there!!! I need the next chapter! XD This chapter made me soooo happy! I'm glad Emory is making his way to recovery and Atara + Mack...daaamnnn it's hot. I need more of them!

I do not know i love Atara a lot but i love Emory more partly because his pain and because we read about his childhood in first story.

Mack is a love interest. i do not know Mack s better for Emory or a very strong person who can control him and his pain is better for him.

Emory needs gentle and firm hand at the same time. maybe Riordan from first story can be a good match. maybe another should be king for example Emory husband or Atara husband. and please give Emory a child at the end he lost everything but he deserve a child.

Oh my gods you are fucking amazing! Moooooore pleeeeeeease♥

I hope that Kinnon comes back to become a love interest with Emory. I know that they were close when he was a boy and that would be awesome. And Kinnon has the ability to be gentle when needed and firm at the same time. As for our favorite healer I REALLY want him to be with our soon to be crowned prince. I mean it would be really cute because he seems to have a good head. And well the key is to find someone who will play the game with them not for them. After all they are just chess pieces.

I am curious do you plan out your story from top to bottom or do you let a stream of words or sentences decide what happens next. What ever I am still hooked on your tale!

So far I'm liking Mack. If anyone can change the way things are done, it's gonna be Atara. Maybe it was meant to happen that way so that someone with Atara's personality and love could change things. I hope so.