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Poooooor emory.i wish i was there for him.i really did n see that one coming.happy for mach and arata and their first kiss but im more concerned about emory than his brother right now.
And another thing where is the uncle and cousins? They're suposed to be there for emory and for arata crowning ceremony.

As an afterthought I have decided to elaborate on the last review: you see, we were horrified by chapter 2 and begged you not to kill Emory, now we know to be careful with what we wish for, you illustrated your point so now we would prefer to see an end to his suffering...

"this was as good as any rite and that he should have taken it earlier."

Okay.. you know what if Atara looses it after this and commits genocide by killing off every single (or almost every single one I'm sure there are a few decent people worth keeping) Lierian for that remark alone it would only make me happy. If that's what they think of Emory's brutal rape that ruined him and at this point lost them the next Infinito (which they are supposed to oh I don't know actually give a d*** about) because of the damage they did to him... Well all I can say is they will not be missed and I would love that kind of ending muchly.

At this point rather than trying to keep things "fair" with the rite giving everyone a chance to father the next Infinito it just seems that the council etc are a bunch of corrupt pieces of trash who all want to get a pass at the Infinitos. They don't treat them nearly as nice as they make it sound like they do all things considered. More like an object than a person. It honestly seems like the people at large just see Infinito as a warm hole for public use with no right to say what can and cannot be done with their own body and forced to live in a gilded cage with a false title that is d*** near worthless and brings only misery. If they wouldn't approve of this sort of thing happening to their females then it should not fly with their King/God/Infinito. I bet the only reason it hasn't been removed from tradition is probably because they brainwash every new Infinito they raise building up the rite as if it's something loving and to be looked forward to. Given that they even see Emory's rape as a valid "rite" that should have happened sooner it's really telling as far as what that d*** rite really is about. There is no love in this. There is no everyone coming together to boud and bring around the next gen. No desire to lead themselves into prosperity vs making use of their unique baby factory... it's disgusting that the Lierians are not hunting down those 2 and I bet you anything they reason they can't be found is their being hid/safe guarded from Atara and the rest seen as heros having managed a job well done. Sorry I keep reviewing/venting like every new chapter but... I got so attached last story that it's just really hurting my heart to see things like this. Esp since Atara is breaking down so heavily but trying to carry the weight for Emory despite it all while being the forgotten child. That goes right to the feels as something I can relate to.

Here's to the it's not actually ganna happen blind hope that someone manages to made some kind of medication to stop heats so Atara can never be forced into the same kinda thing. I won't even bother wishing for a way to fix Emory so he can have a kid properly because that's an even more impossible wish. Sorry for the wall of text this is just what happens when I am to depressed to go to sleep when I should.

Dear I really appreciate ur every day update.thank u. Hope u keep it till the end.
U know at this point im really curious to know how ur going to deal with emory situation.Arata and Mack yes i can see their story and love and ...but emory? No.im completely out of any idea.and u know we all have a history with him in TLOGAK and some how he is special.

Every time I read this I just get so sad. Does it get better for Emory. I hope it does cause I really am invested in him.

Ragey, ragey. If Atara wants someone to hold Emory up, why doesn't he do it himself? I know it hurts Emory to see him, but they've been there for each other for so long, maybe that's what he needs. I wonder if Mack is into some of the same stuff Fox is in to? Atara seems like a submissive personality.

oh my god

forgive me dear , i did not pay attention . i thought Riordan was their cousin , FOX' nephew not his brother .

please find a lover for Emory , his pain is so much , he really needs some one who held him during that dark moment a strong person who can carry some of his pain.

Ohhhhhhh Emory. You know its kinda stupid.i mean you have every thing.you are crowned prince. you're the most powerful person in your country after your dad. You're perfec.then some one rapes you and you become what?nothing????
And dont tell me his cousin will be his love interest? Nooooo im soooo not a fan of f/M.not fair at all.
And why it cant be an Emory story? Why its Arata's? Not fair.even you chose Arata over him.

My heart aches so bad for Emory and Atara! Atara being all alone because all in all he is still a kid and gods poor Emory! I keep trying to think how Em will find his soul mate in this state and I just can't! I'm just so glad that one way or another he will! And Mack, no one will blame you for fucking Atara stupid-well at least I won't! I had thought for a moment the stress had put Atara into an early heat!

And since it is 600am my time and I still haven't slept because I work until midnight at my new job and my body is so fucked up on this sick schedule that after two hours of laying in bed wide awake and freesong after reading this chapter I picked my cell back up and went on your Tumbler! Let me tell you, girl, I don't even have a tumbler but I would follow your page any day! The fucking hotness! I love the ideas you have going for Mack and Em! I like Atara too, I just keep picturing him as light blonde like Cryl for some reason?? But I think you mentioned his hair darkened which would make sense... I'm so sorry for rambling though, I'm just so tired and awake! Can't wait for the next update!

I would love to see Emory's point of view, and to see Mack with Emory. Mack would be perfect for Emory. I would love to know what Emory's thoughts where regarding his situation. This story is one sided. Besides the rape happen to Emory not Atara, and it would be awesome to know what Emory's thoughts would be on what happen to him.