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Hmm, I'm curious as to what these "rules" are. *maniacal laughter, and evil grins abound*

I keep telling myself I will go to bed after this. I hope my body listens!

So I love Mack! I mean, I love all your characters but Mack is just so cute and devilishly handsome! Love the bj scene, can't wait for more! And I loved learning more about Mack!

I love Em too! I can't stop wondering if he is a bottom or top though? I thought he was a top at first but now I'm seeing him as more of a pretty boy that needs a big strong man to help put him back together! And did I see that right? Is Em going to have a thing with his guard Blue because that would be very hot!

Anyway, good night! Can't wait for next update!

thank you dear

it was very good

that whole scene was really hot (hot damn!) Mack is a pretty cool dude, i rly like him. he and Atara mesh very well together. i need more scenes of them together! i get so excited and happy when they interact.

YESSSSS. Every chapter gets better and better! Mack and Atara are fast becoming my favorite couple/pairing XD I didn't want their encounter to come to an end! Mack is really endearing, everything about him is endearing to me. It will be interesting to see how Atara's parents react to the idea of him being with a man 8 years older than him *which I'm totally cool with, I think age gaps are hot* I also wonder if Emory would be a little overprotective of Atara if he knew he was in a relationship with Mack. Great chapters, it was a real treat to get two in one day! I'm in desperate need of more now! XD

What a great update! Im happy Emory ate but who knows if it will last? I love Mack...but im worried what his motives are. He is alot older than Atara. I really hope that Emory and Atara have their day of revenge with the assholes that hurt Emory. I had to pick my jaw up off the floor when I realized he was losing a baby! Nice twist! I cant wait for an update...I have read ALOT of stories on here and this one is by far one of my top 3 favorites! It would make one hell of a movie!♥

Daily review tiiiiime jk jk. Mack worries way to much considering what Atara's own father had to do to keep Emory safe and fed. There's no way Atara would judge/treat him any different for it since thinking less of him would also mean thinking less of Cyril. Nice to see some other sides of him that don't sound quite so 24/7 cocky though.

Oooh, I didn't like the name Mack but I like the name Mackenzie for the love interest.
I'm happy again, since now I'll automatically think MacKenzie when I see Mack haha. I'm weird, don't mind me.

Is Nikita for Emory. Yay Nikita. I love Nikita, even if he isn't for Emory.

*sigh* just kill him already, enough love has been demonstrated (it would be mercy at this point)...