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The Cyril X Fox couple. They have to have some sort of power play drama before they can talk and it's more emotional yelling than talking in my opinion.

Atara needs to lower his stress. If the idiots wanna press their luck then just give them no rep at all until they learn to do as they are told.
I hope nothing goes to horribly wrong with that cult though I'd like to see that corrupt church replaced by a better one.

I don't know why but im more concerned about Em and Kita than Arata/Mack. Anyone else feeling like me? And honestly as much as i liked and adored Kita pov, i couldnt feel the same for Mack pov.
Anyway its just me.
Thanks alot for fast update.i appreciate your great efforts.

Wow another great new chapter^^ I like Macks point of view^^ And the smutt in the carriage was so hot!!! I have a bad feeling concerning the murders.... Hope everything will be alright^^ See you again tomorrow!!!

I love that you're writing in several perspectives so we know what everyone's thinking too

Oh god no.... Please please please let Emory not get abused, raped again, or anything else if he gets sent away. Places like those never help people but break them more and with the corrupt way a lot of stuff is run in world, the murderer(s) running around that could get to him pretty easily with a bribe most likely, and being away from Kita... This is feeling like a this might get so bad I can't read it moment.

I've been following this story (and all your stories) for a while. Finally getting around to write a review.

Is Emory getting a happy ending? I understand that he's damaged psychologically, and that he has to get treatment at the "place beyond the wood", and lord knows that that his treatment of dear kita is beyond terrible, but man... I want him (and especially kita) to have a happy ending. Emory has become so endearing after so many chapters. :(

Wow, I didn't like this chapter. I really don't like the way Emory was being portrayed. I understand Emory is in a bad place, but this is taking it to the extreme. Now, that Emory and Kita are out the picture we can now be overwhelmed with Atara and Mack`s perfect relationship. The perfect glorified couple can reign now. I`t would have been better if I would have given Emory poison per Mack. Just write him out already. Enough, is enough oh, you are doing just that.

Now that they are sending Emory away are we never going to hear from him again are you giving to have them abandoning him now this it of Emory;because, I fill that is not right for them to send him away forget that he is no longer a part of the family.

outstanding as always! I think it's about time Emory was taken to one of those places because like you wrote he's just not in a good place at all and I honestly thought he was going to kill someone.... I don't think anyone there would have been off limits with the way Emory was acting. It sucks that Maya was killed in such a gruesome way! I hope who ever it is.... "lady glenning????" get's their come-up-ins! It worries me that like Mack said there were two different cutting marks and the poison it makes me wonder it both races are plotting? Sorry I haven't had a chance to review sooner but I just got caught up! so I'll be anon-ish since anonj is taken. Thank you for your wonderful story telling!

OH MY GOD IS KITA GOING TO KIDNAP EMORY BY SAYING GOOD BYE??? I don't think he's able to yet but he could bribe someone and maybe have him taken to his new home??? I know you're not going to just send Emory away and that's the end of it I hope that he meets someone at the "rest home" that will be able to help him cope with his life and I HOPE SOME ONE is able to help Kita as well...