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I think the decision with emory was right... Maybe they can help him at that place, atleast I hope so!!!! And I hope that will not be the last we see of Emory!!! Poor Kita he really needs some loving!!! Thanks for the chapter and see you again soon!!!

Uh oh.... I thought Emory was getting better >.< Poor Kita....
But question- aren't they rich enough to look after Emory without sending him to the asylum place?

Bring back the sweet lovey-dovey too much disaster and chaos...LOL I have enough of my own! Gslinger

Lurker here! So yes there's been so much death, destruction, and sadness! Makes for a good storyline tho even though everyone's suffering and we are all having heart attacks. And with how things are now I'm worried about the life for every character including Fox and Cyril :,-(. I'm also scared that Kita and Emory won't be reunited because Atara kept saying how he never saw Kita again? Oh no! Sigh I do feel bad about Kita and Emory but I want to see them succeed even tho it's totally not healthy sigh. And poor Atara so worried now. Can't wait to see where you go with this! And on a side note as readers it is a privilege that you share your work with us. If some readers are getting catty....it's weird because you have the ultimate artistic license you know? Anyways this is def nail biting times and I wanted to thank you for the ride so far!

WOW WHAT A CLUSTER FUCK! I'm guessing those are the berserkers you mentioned a lil while ago huh? Unless there is some new mind control drug out there? I'm guessing lady glenning and maybe the council members are in cahoots with each other and that is who is causing this civil war out break.... The guards being in on it well ain't that some shit???? Mack is right though, those doing the killings and those giving the orders for that are to blame not Atara.... I know you're not going to kill Mack off at this point I'm guessing that maybe because he's a healer and a Halfling that maybe he's had to build an immunity to some of the poisons out there I mean you know the whole guard training and such? Well I was thoroughly gripping the edge of my seat THANK YOU VERY MUCH! Now would be a good time to wait a few days and not post again but I'm hoping you aren't that sadistic???? Again thank YOU for sharing your story's with us!

Atara really frustrates me sometimes...also, is lady glenning behind this?

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! not Atara and Mack. Fuck! Why Emory!!!! I'm so sad for all of them

No no no no noooooo no no please let it be the Cult or someone who won't hurt him that took Arata... Excuse me while I cringe away to curl up and die slowly in the corner.

Omg Nnnnooooo!!!!!! (/´Д｀)/ not Mack! Omg who else is going to die? I don't think my heart can take it. You've hurt my spirit. ヽ(´Д`；)

Oh, don't fall apart world, Atara's got enough to deal with.