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for Beauty in the Ashes

by Alasdair-you

person Latonya
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I`m not jumping to conclusions, just expressing my views or you could say my emotions or feelings on each chapter. So, sometimes my emotions get the best of me. Please don't take it personally. With that said, I do believe that Lady Glenning will not get a happy ending. Again, just my opinion.
person 2CinnaBlue
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*Resists the CPR*

Until I know they are not ganna rape and breed Atara I am not reviving or coming out of the corner. *nods firmly*
Glad Mack survived though. He needs to hurry up and father a child with Atara so this crap can never happen again.

P.S. Please let Emory finally cut loose and kill all the traditionalists! Pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry even?
person Chardae
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So glad that Mack's okay! And I hope Fox and Atara are going to come out of this alive and breathing with both legs and other body parts still intact. I hope it's Lady Glenning that dies. Let that bitch burn!!! Kill her! ヾ(。`Д´。)
person Moku_Sui
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just curious, but are you going to explain how Emory got better or no? Also, please don't tell me Fox gets killed. TT I was just irritated that Atara was stupid enough to throw down his bow as Mack expressed. Granted, I'd imagine I would do the same in his shoes. I just wish he didn't...
person anon d
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh no, don't let Fox Sr. die! D: or we'll have one less Fox
person anon-ish
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
..... I don't remember seeing major character death in the tag's for the story... I can only hope Fox is alive I seem to recall lady glenning was at one point hoping to marry Fox. I'm probably wrong but still. I hope everyone finds the one's they love alive and not too broken.
person Mona Thompson
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uummmm im not sure why a certain reviewer felt the need to be such a dick BUT on to better things! This story is just so fucking great! I love the emotional rollercoaster it keeps me on! Weeeeeeeeeee! I love the happy times...the smut...the heart ache...all of it! You are pretty awesome and please keep up the amazing updates! I cant believe how fast they have been coming along! You rock♥ OH! And I would really like to see another chapter from Cyrils POV...I just love him:)
person Tahn
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Jeeze, Emory is losing it. His parents are right, he's lost control and has grown violent. I hope Nikita doesn't do something stupid. Emory needs help, but it doesn't look like Nik's been any help. It seems to have gotten worse. It makes me sad to remember the cute little boy who loved to laugh from the first book. So much badness is happening, I hope it can all be dealt with.
person Candigirl
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
First, I love the other's povs! But I thought you said things were getting better!!!

But this little "goodbye" makes me think that kita isn't letting Em go an asylum. If anything I see the two running away but with Em in this state I worry more about him killing Nikita! :(
person angela
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD

MY heart broke for Emory :(((((((( Atara is kind a good brother but i am angry with Fox and Cyril . they left Emory and were not in his side i know he is dark and hateful toward others but for god sake he had a bad memory , they raped him in front of his brother , he has every right to get angry . i like Kita so much he is the best thing happened to Emory . i hope Kite take Emory away maybe steal him and take him to his country and help him to become mentally healthy again . sending Emory to a place and treat him like he is crazy is the worst thing.