rate_review Reviews

This chapter was wonderfully written despite how terrible it was. When you can make readers forget their reading fiction & not experiencing something that's really happening, then you should be proud of yourself. Yes it was painful & as the author I'm sure you understand that more than anyone. I only have one request: Can we kill Lady Glenning Vlad the Impaler style? Alongside those nasty traditionalists. Long & slow.

(I'm not a sadist. I swear)

I made the mistake of reading answers first before I started the story.... I don't have the heart to start at the beginning of this chaptehatr my eyes are blurring and I read I don't know how but my computer landed just right enough to read the be-heading of Fox his plea to Kita and I read it to it's end and I have snot dripping out of my nose.... well not now anymore but that is really saying something about your ability to write and breath life into a story, I hope maybe later in the day or day's I'll be able to start this one at the beginning... but for now I wanted to at least let you know I got my answer....

RIP Fox :( This is a totally irrelevant question, but I just gotta know... who's going to take care of Cyril's heat now since Fox Sr. is gone?

So help me. I rely hope the actually death you speak of is lady glenning and not fox....please don't kill fox :( :( :(

No! I keep telling myself there is no major character death tag but you said there is one death... Please don't kill off Fox! I feel that will ruin Cryill and after all the shit that couple has been through, I don't think it would be fair!

Glad Emory is better all though it scares me to think of what they did to him to make him better... Hopefully just therapy!

And Kita is stealthy! I'm sure he is fine!

THANKS GOD
EMORY is better , he is going to save them Atara , Kita and hopefully his father

I have bad feelings for who is gonna die. I also have a feeling that I will soon be crying when they do.

Please *Sniff Cry!* Don't ...Don't kill fox T~T My heart can't take the loss...please

Wow...This is getting so intense! I was still reading ALoGaK when you started this one, and just got caught up on BitA a few days ago, so now I am finally reviewing. First of all, I love these stories, you do such an amazing job of bringing the characters and emotions to life. I am very glad Mack is alive, and I will cry if Fox is dead/dies. I am also glad to see Emory doing better. I love that you've been writing from so many different POVs, it definitely gives great insight to each of the characters. I was noticing other readers seem to really like one pairing over another, but I love both AtaraxMack and EmoryxKita for different reasons but equally.

On a tangential note: while I was reading ALoGaK I kept thinking about a story of mine (which is still mostly in my head and not posted anywhere, yet) and all the funny little similarities. I have a character named Cyril, who is (unusually for the universe he's in) a male that is able to get pregnant, and his partner has a very similar look to Fox (black hair, green eyes). I just thought that was kind of interesting :)

So this turned into a quite a long review. Anyway, loving this story and I can't wait for more!

So Emory's allowed to just go? Just like that??