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I can see that Fox's body amplifies the grief and permits a cathartic firewell with the loved one, even if not a closure yet. I just believe that without the body as a tangible proof, I wouldn't have minded the bittersweet hope that you can't help clinging to. Since your stories are a bit of an emotional rollercoaster, this melancholic ever present sadness tinged with hope would have been welcomed (by me at least).
All this said, I never (!!) intend to influence, suggest or correct a writer. The story is yours. My task is to show support and appreciation if I like your work. :)

Thank you for not making me break down and cry through out the entire chapter. lol I vote slow torture for them all! Needles under the fingernails, ripping out said finger nails, chinese water torture, etc etc! Torture them all!

I'm not a violent person, but I hope Lady Glenning and her followers get what they deserve. Retribution is so welcomed, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Lady Glenning has to suffer. I think Cyril should get to cut her in half from her belly to her head and the council members should get a rite. Let's see how they like it. They should have to do it to each other.

First burn the bitches pretty face that she is so proud of off, pull out all of her teeth and then put the bitch in a brothel as a whore for people with violent, brutal sexual tendencies, so she can get a taste of what she was doing to Cyril's people. Cut a finger off for each week she spends in the brothel, then move on to her toes. When twenty weeks are up in the brothel, put her on the post and give her 500 lashes (make sure that the person wielding the whip is strong enough to kill her before her lashes are up). That way no one can claim that she was executed because as you said in ALOGAK, accidents on the post happen. (I swear I am actually a nice, normal, and sane human being).

Yeeees you got the reference!!!

Now hopefully they can make it in time. Thanks again for the quick chapters I was in a really bad mood just now and seeing Emmy about to step up and take that b*tch's head made me feel a bit better.

This is so messed up...as much as it makes sense, I still wish it didn't and some miracle happened...

I`m not surprised that Fox was beheaded, and Kita was sent to be tortured. Why not torture the already tortured? However, Mack is still breathing. Ironically and originally no character death was suppose to happen. Maybe, I misunderstood. I know on the last chapter there was a mentioning of a character death. But, like I've been saying this story is unfair and twisted. Happy endings? More deaths? Not surprised, at all. Emotionally hurt to my heart that Fox`s character doesn't exist anymore, but Mack (glorified) still exist. There is no way to justify or rectify Fox`s death to me. Note, this is just my views on this chapter. Please, don't take it personally.

u killed fox. I drop this story.right here right now.good bye.

First and foremost, I just want to say that I love this story with all of my heart (or pieces of my heart as of this chapter). Beauty in the ashes has been so difficult for me to read because you make the characters seem so real and I feel as if I am sharing in their pain. And this story has been inundated with pain. If it would help I would beg you to add a magical component to your story to resurrect Fox, but alas, you have never once shied away from or sheltered your characters from emotional and or physical trama so I don't think begging to bring him back will work on you. I can only hope that you manage to reunite Fox and Cyril in death after Lady Glenning is tortured and executed. I can't see Cyril sticking around much longer after this conflict is resolved, especially since both of his boys have faithful, trustworthy men who love them entirely. I normally would never request that you kill a main character off, but I truly think that keeping Cyril alive without Fox will be crueler than any form of torture you could inflict on him. Though this story and this chapter in particular have broken my heart, I can't help but applaud your magnificent writting and storytelling abilities. You are an astounding author and I can't wait for the next installment, no matter what happens. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.