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I'm glad you are still writing this story. I can't wait to learn more.

Yay, I'm so glad there was an update! I'm liking Aaron now. Mainly because he seems rather sexy. :D But he's so mysterious. I totally agree with Connor; not getting any answers and being unable to tell anyone about Aaron is just really frustrating. So if Aaron really did leave the Clan and is seeking refuge with the Paladins, I'm wondering why? Is he in danger? And why is he so interested in Connor? Is he developing feelings for Connor or manipulating him...?

Also, new characters! They seem fishy in the bad way. Clan people? Can't wait to find out.

Aaron is so hot.. and Tin is an ass lol Cant wait for more juicyness and Im guessing Conn's mom got into a little trouble with the clan.. Or she is clan... or conns dad is clan? damn i dont know. Love your writing super interesting!

Uh oh, wonder what's about to go down. Can't wait to figure all this out. Thanks for the new chapter :D

So maybe connor is one of the clansmen? That would make sense if his mother tried to escape and was killed and he was disgused as the child of others^^ And Aron is probably a clansmen too... So can't wait for more!!!!

I've seen this story on the original fiction homepage and just never read it. That was a complete mistake! I'm loving this. It's totally awesome. You really don't see a lot of cool fantasy slash stories. This whole Paladin and Hoole thing is just one big mystery. I don't know if the Paladins are good or not or whether the Clanspeople are good... or if they are actually assassins. And Aaron. What the hell/who the hell is he? I'm hoping we'll find out in the next chapter. But most importantly, I'm hoping to find out who Connor is. He's light-footed and all quiet-like, so does he have some sort of power of his own? I cannot wait for more!!

Oh, Aaron is back! Awesome! I can't wait to find out more (:

Oh dear, I hope they aren't enemies.

Interesting so the clan of hoole has something to do with the paladins..... Strange!!! And the way connor moves in this chapter doesn't seem quite human... I wonder what he is^^ Can't wait for more see you again soon!!!!

I'm enjoying This story more and more. Keep up the good work!