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I'm totally enthralled. I can't wait for more. Xoxo Robin

Yay!! An update! I always get so excited when I see your updates~ This was another great chapter and I was happy for both the intimacy between Connor and Aaron as well as the reveal about Connor's powers (at least a bit of it and it's not frustrating at all, I understand the need to build tension). I'm excited to see more as this story continues to progress.

I hope they don't get caught. Seems like bad bad things will happen if they do. So, would the Paladins be able to help him?

Ooh. Well I'm glad I deciaded 2 finally click on this story & not just go past it like I've bin doing since I first noticed it. Enjoying this so far, except 4 the progression. It just seems a bit slow in places, & fast in others. Also, it hasn't bin made clear what Aarons 'trait' is, what exactly the 'clan' does/is their goal(even if it was hinted that it "maybe" an organised crime syndicate), how they move n society as a group, how the paladins or any1 els apposes them, or Eric's connection 2 any of this(shouldn't he hav bin askt already???). I also want 2 point out that ther seems litl point n kidnapin Conner, as his being almost an adult makes it pretty hard 2 brainwash him like kids born n2 the clan... Sooo can I get sum help understanding here??? Is there a forum I can go 2??? Plz update soon!!!
Rukia

I'm soooo excited we finally got to learn more about the Clan and about Aaron's past. One thing is fo' sho'; the Clan is all kinds of fucked up. It's cool that we got to learn a little more about Connor's special gifts. I wonder if he inherited this trait from his father or if his father had some other trait? And now I really need to know Aaron's special talent (other than making whoopie with Connor!). Things are all messed up now... not sure how they will escape. And now the Clan basically knows where they are.

This story is crazy good. It reads as smooth to me as a big market published book. You should definetly get this published in paper back or e-book and if not then make something just like it and do it. I'd definetly buy it!
I can't wait to read what happens next! ;)

Yay! Another chapter so soon. An ah! How this one pulled at my heart-strings. The part with his parents and how Connor just broke down. Oh! My fragile heart! I know they are doing this to protect him but dang it I don't have to like the situation. I digress, this was a great chapter and I'm excited to learn more~ can't wait to hear more about Connor's dad and those dreams too. They've been constant and I've been wondering if they're somehow connected to being clan? And if that includes some genetic or innate powers like being paladin for Tin.

Just where are they planning on taking him, and what happens if he gets caught in his dream?

I was so excited to see a new update already! I guess the big question is, what does the Clan actually want from Connor? Clearly he has some super ninja skills so do they want to utilize him for some seedy underground work? And now I wonder about these dreams... Is the twin's dad able to "find" Connor's location through the dreams? Connor should definitely speak up about his nightmares; it's possible Aaron and Eric may know something about them. I also feel real bad for Connor's parents. But what's the long term plan? Is Connor gonna have to run forevah??

Also, even though Connor was sad, I did thoroughly enjoy the Aaron-Connor cuddle-and-comfort fest at the end of this chapter. :D

Ah! More things! Yay! Also, Tin kinda angered me in this chapter. Normally, I think of him as a clueless cutie to a point but I dislike his adamant dislike of Aaron. It's not his place to tell Connor who he can and cannot be with just like Connor hasn't been pissy about his paladin temptress. (Sorry I have a lot of feelings) But I'm also so excited to hopefully be on the road to find out more things! :D answers are finally happening and I'm so much excite! I cannot wait for the next chapter!